Oh my God. Why. Why the heck did I read this!? At least Yellow really isn't dead XD great job

Very angsty... I love it when SpecialShipping ends in tragedy. Poor Red. Could use a BIT more emotion... and there were some grammatical errors. Other than that, good!

That. Was so. Touching! That made me cry. It maybe short but it was the most touching then next to Johnny Cade dying. Opps talking about Outsiders again. Sorry. Anyway, great job! This story made me cry. Again, touching.