Great back-and-forth. Shawn DOES get way too much special treatment by O'Hara...and the chief...and everybody really. Glad Lassiter called her out.

My sides hurt, I laughed so hard! Awesome job on this, I love it!:)

Aw, I loved this! Lassiter brought up some very valid points. Loved the "He's thirty freaking six!" Everyone was very in-character, and I could totally picture this as part of an episode.

I love it, thank you!

cute and so true!

Haha that was funny(: but I'm pretty sure Shawn's 33... And I don't think he smells like cheese! But it is kind of true about the leeway she gives them... But

It also seems like lassie always goes for the low blow when he makes fun of Shawn, like he's trying to be mean instead of just bug him. But that also seems to be just how he comes of.

The tapeworm joke was hilarious!

Good story but too bad she rather date a child over a man. :)

Spot freakin' ON. He is an ass, but he's well aware of it and he's the adult and she's well aware of it, but I can't blame him for being tired of being the whipping boy.

Go Carlton, calling Juliet on her double standard and go Juliet for having a reason for it.

Verra nice.

I won't even nudge you, even though...

Okay. No. I said I wouldn't nudge.

I'll stop now and go back to writing CH15.