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| icebluehost 2008-04-21 ch 57,  | abuseThis is really an interesting story. Though when I looked at the updated date I felt let down. I hope you'll suddenly have the inspiration to continue this story...although it's been 4 years already. >.< Ah well. It was fun while it lasted. |
| Lluvia-the-Wolfgirl 2008-01-09 ch 57, | abuseawesome! I don't even read One piece, and I love this story! |
| Mojo817 2008-01-07 ch 43, | abuse?!?!? You can't freeze an omlette... |
| Mojo817 2008-01-07 ch 23, | abuseWhoa. this is incredably well written... |
| Demoness Blaze 2007-08-08 ch 57, | abuseQuite possibly one of the best fanfictions I've ever read! :D Keep up the good work! |
| Geminia 2007-06-20 ch 57, | abuseWell, it has been about three years, and I hope I can look forward to your update eventually as this is a very long piece, and I doubt you would simply leave it undone :D Gemini |
| The Flying Pen 2007-03-01 ch 7, | abuseHahaha...I'm only chapter 7, but I had to stop and review 'cause my name is Jenna. :) Teeheehee. And Tashigi is one of my favorite characters. But still funny to see myself as the Bitchy Ringleader. :) ~Pen~ Onward!! |
| Fujin2 2007-01-05 ch 1, | abuseI hope this is one of the stories you're planning on keeping... |
| Krow Blood 2006-11-14 ch 57, | abuseWell, i have you a cuple things, i 'ave been waiting for a god ol'e while second, the name is Kuro, not Krow, I am Krow, not him, I, his name is Kuro And i don't understand if luffy keeps his 17 years old body but W/o the Akuma no mi powers or he keeps his 12 year old body |
| JamieGlasgow4 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of the best One Piece stories I've ever read! I really love it^^ Hope you can update soon... |
| infrequent reviewer 2006-08-23 ch 57, anon. | abuseYeah...I normally don't review much. Cuz I'm lazy. I know its bad, but I felt that this story really deserved a review. It was well done, and had some awesome concepts, and as you've heard from several reviewers already, I'd like to see more chapters. This is a good story that still has more potential to fulfill. Ok I'm done. |
| Nehszriah 2006-08-07 ch 57, | abuse*eyes grow more wide and watery* *hugs fiction-ka* |
| Nehszriah 2006-08-05 ch 1, | abuse*wide eyes* Oh! This looks good! I'm gonna read! ^_^ |
| Britannica Moore 2006-07-11 ch 57, | abuseso i enjoyed reading and i want to know what happens! I really do. This story was just so..intresting and good. So please update or something. |
| Firefly Knights 2006-06-12 ch 57, | abuseWoah, I finally read the new version! Yay! Umm...it looks like you're not updating anymore, which is kinda sad. But, whatever, good luck at whatever you're doing now! Yup. By the way, if you plan to update this, or edit it even, you might want to go back and read it out loud to yourself. I find that helpful for finding mistakes. You had a few sentances that were missing words or made no sense. |