|Reviews for Moving Forwards|
| NJ7009 5/3/12 . chapter 8
AMAZING best Real Steel story there is!
| Sounddrive 5/2/12 . chapter 8
Oh man . . . what is Farra up to now?
| J.R. Hill 4/25/12 . chapter 7
Wow this story is terrible. Do you have any concept of plot or characterization? Do you even know how to speak English? This story is so bad, I can't even believe people are reading this crap. There's not enough dialogue, and all the characters are OOC. Go home and stop writing. Your story (if it can even be called that) is pathetic and you're wasting everyone's time.
| Sounddrive 4/24/12 . chapter 7
Poor Atom . . . oi, well there's always next time!
| NJ7009 4/14/12 . chapter 6
I thought you said you were bad at action scenes...
Please update soon, great story so far
| Sounddrive 4/14/12 . chapter 6
Atom has been out of practice for awhile. I expected this to happen; not every battle can be won.
Charlie's fears came true in this one, hope things will cool down eventually.
| D 3/31/12 . chapter 5
This story should be interesting. If Atom does have better technology than he should be able to hold out against International Orange. And he might be smaller, but he can use that to his advantage and avoid the hits. And Charlie can predict another robots movements, so it should be easy enough to dodge and counter their attacks. If International Orange is a lot bigger than Atom, than the best thing to do is probably get in as close as possible so the other robots' reach isn't effective, and they can't land blows as easily. That's what he did with Twin Cities. Please write more soon!
| NJ7009 3/29/12 . chapter 5
Oh PLEASE LET ATOM LIVVVEEE
Please update soon
| Sounddrive 3/27/12 . chapter 5
When Charlie is nervous, it gets me nervous . . . good luck boys . . . I'm praying for you!
| Sounddrive 3/20/12 . chapter 4
A bit of an odd name for a bot . . . but no matter . . . things are about to heat up people!
| NJ7009 3/20/12 . chapter 4
Awww I love it
I wonder how Atom will fare against International orange, he sounds menacing but im still for Atom so GO ATOM! :)
I also love Max in this story, he really stays in character good job.
Please update soon
| Narnian-Fairy-at-Hogwarts007 3/19/12 . chapter 3
I'm finally getting around to reviewing! :D Thanks for being so patient with me, fair warning I am doing this at like 7 am so hopefully it'll make sense!
Anyway, this was a nice solid chapter, it would have been nice if it was a tad longer but that is just a personal preference.
You described the relationship between Max and Atom quite well, I was impressed. So kudos for that. :) You descriptions were done nicely as well along with thoughts and feelings.
I know that every piece of writing can always be improved upon so I am not going to say it was perfect but in all honestly I can't really find anything major that really needs work. But if I think of something I will let you know!
I look forward to reading the next chapter. :)
| trololololololololol 3/13/12 . chapter 3
Awesome! PLEASE UPDATE! Also, the other anonymous reviewer is a flobberworm.
| InvaderLuver 3/13/12 . chapter 3
This is one of the better stories to me up here, and there are very few. I dont like OCs at all, so I'm happy to read this!
Love the plot so far, keep it up!
| NJ7009 3/12/12 . chapter 3
Please update soon this is an AMAZING story