|Reviews for Forgiveness|
| GingerJerkyPear 5/16/13 . chapter 4
Oh My God! Great chapter. XD I can't wait to see what happens next.
Please update soon!
| King's King 1/24/13 . chapter 3
God! My heart hurts! Please give them a happy-ending!
| Alsarnia 1/1/13 . chapter 3
Oh no! D: They've both been captured! Poor, poor Balthazar, he's been through so much...both of them have. It's so terrible what's happened to them, but your writing's so good I can't stop reading it!
Aw man, I have no clue what's going to happen next but I have a feeling that it's not going to be good for the boys...
I really hope that you decide to continue with this, it's really good and now I want to know what happens!
| JigglyJelloWithCoconut 12/9/12 . chapter 1
Balthazar is a David Bowie fan?!
More love for Balthazar! :D
| symmetry888 11/2/12 . chapter 3
This is a really great story and I like how the charactors bond with each other and have reactions how I thought they would be after the movie so great job and keep up the awesome work
| Penelope V 10/1/12 . chapter 2
Please please update this soon! I'm really enjoying it and I love the relationship between Balthezar and Dave.
| NameWhatName 9/7/12 . chapter 1
Are you a supernatural fan? Because these lines reminded me a lot of the pilot episode...
"Balthazar, we really have to update your cassette collection."
"Well, first of all, they're cassettes. Second of all, is there anything here newer than the 1980s? And since when are you a David Bowie fan?" asked Dave noting there were three of the singer's cassettes.
"Dave, you forget the golden rule: he who owns the car picks the music, while he who rides shotgun shuts his pie-hole," said the master sorcerer as he climbed in. He shot his apprentice a glance, a small smirk playing on his lips.
Ah, who knows. Maybe I just have it on the brain too much right about now. Great job on the story, I'm enjoying reading it.
| Oriongirl 6/8/12 . chapter 2
I have to say this fic gets their dynamic perfectly and I can't wait until you update this. Hope your beta edits soon! Keep 'em coming :)
| Oriongirl 6/8/12 . chapter 1
I am LOVING this story! Please continue soon as I don't think I can wait for much longer!
| GingerJerkyPear 5/31/12 . chapter 2
I am loving the story so far. :) please, please, please update soon, I'm dying to see what happens next! Great job! :D
| kenobigirlliz 5/20/12 . chapter 2
This was a really good chapter, and although the cliff hanger is evil some nice development. Nice to see you again :)
| Ree923 4/8/12 . chapter 1
I just found this and really like the character interaction, this is another of my favorite movies (No David Bowie, but nothing is perfect) LOL
| bluedragon1836 4/2/12 . chapter 1
Since reviews fuel, here's mine :) Really enjoying the story so far, can't wait to find out what happens next!
| jngp 3/26/12 . chapter 1
you're an amazing writer. this is the third piece of yours from this fandom that i've read, and i like how you balance dave's status as apprentice with his identity as the prime merlinian. he still has lots to learn, but at the same time, he's more than an ordinary sorceror.
the relationships between characters are splendid. especially balthazar's and dave's. they truly are master and apprentice, balthazar caring about dave's wellbeing and ensuring his training is as complete as possible, and dave respecting and caring about him in turn.
i hope you manage to get past the writer's block you have on this story. thank you for giving us your best :)
| Someone 3/15/12 . chapter 1
I really really really really really really really really like this story! Please continue!