Great story! I absolutely loved it! Thank you for writing this!
I totally agree with the age thing, and I have often wondered how old he really was; I haven't seen a picture of him when he was a young man, only an old man.
Snowsong of SnowClan

Beautifully written. You managed to make it work very well with the actual story, and it feels believable. Great job!

So I was beyond surprised that the Book of Mormon had a category, but yes there are lots of untold stories that could've been.

As for the story - I always imagined that the wives (rarely mentioned) would be like this. Confident in their love and in the purpose, willing to leave all earthly ties and possessions behind if needed.

Thanks for writing.

Wow. This is amazing. It made me cry. Very believable, very well-written, very spiritual. I love this story; thank you for writing it.

This is awesome! Thanks for writing and having the genius to think of it! :)

OMIGOODNESS! i've been waiting so long for this section to come out, I was always curious who would be the first stories, what people would think of, I never expected something so mature and professional sounding, I love this OC you've come up with!