._. More plz?

Sy's a j*** a** .and what five year old has read the dictionaryFIVE times? doesn't matter, great story:*)

Fantastic! I like it that you keep it from little girl's perspective - nice twist :) Sy is an ass, but I really enjoy(and enjoyed in the movie) his character. I guess he is an interesting badass, but not a total villain. Same here. I hope you'll keep him in the story :)

All I can say is Awwwwwwwwwwww! And why in the hell is Sy still around. I hate him.

Aww good ending! I hate to see it go but all good stories must come to an end. I really enjoyed the part about temper tantrums and the switch becoming Rachel's best friend. That had me laughing out loud. Thanks for the story I really enjoyed it :)

It was good! They had the day all to their selfs. And that forever with their names was so cute of Frank to do. Up date soon can't wait to see what in store for them next!

It was good! They had the day all to their selfs. And that forever with their names was so cute of Frank to do. Up date soon can't wait to see what in store for them txt

Great chapter, but there is one thing I don't understand. Why does it say that Frank had never seen Rachel in lingerie? Just curious, haha :)

aww what an adorable chapter. I loved the place they went it was nice & quiet like they like it. I can just imagine them there.

good chapter!

After the the newlyweds faze give them some drama!

I'm with them, more drama! I love when they're happy but everyone has a little drama. Makes things interesting :) Can't wait for the update!

Okay I with them all the way. And how about they go on some walks together. Also I say give Frank a woman that has a crush on him which makes Rachel mad and the j word lol!

Yeah, a drama! Some jealousy and angst. I'm cruel, I know ;)

I'm great with ideas! Maybe Rachel & Frank can have a few date nights with each other after the honeymoon (maybe like a few months later), maybe discuss having more children? Maybe add in more drama for them somehow. I love drama.