|Reviews for Dependency: Honor|
| watermelonwafflesBISCUITS 12/25/12 . chapter 21
Okay, I read all 3 of these stories in one sweep and have one thing to say about all of them: OH MY GOSH. LOVE IT. I know that I may be fangirling to an impossible degree but I love how you've been able to keep it in character, put a dash of your own ideas in there AND continue along this path for 3 whole good stories! I'm enjoying this series very much and hope that it is continued because where you left it off at... Now I just need more!
Keep The Epicness Up.
| HistoryHound 12/14/12 . chapter 21
Well, I got to say, you're amazing! I haven't even read a Star Trek fanfiction in 3, maybe 4, years! I can't really say what brought about the sudden desire to become reacquainted with my old, favorite series, but I'm glad it happened. Generally I don't have time due to school, but now it's winter break, and I got to say, this was one well spent day. And I mean the whole day! :D Back when I was OBSESSED with TOS I was never into slash. Well, shows change and so do opinions, so I had the strongest urge to see what was new in the Spock/McCoy community. I couldn't have been more pleased with what I found. You're considerations and care with character development and personality is wonderful! It spanned over three stories in fact! Nothing worse than a fanfic that begins with one character being irresistibly attracted to another (when it's not a canon couple!). In other words, thank you for not just writing smut without a purpose. Romance is more than just physical attraction, and unfortunately a lot of authors ignore this. All these mind games and emotional links, it's perfect! Just what the doctor ordered (pun intended)! I'm really interested in this Romulan and whether or not he has any connection to Serin...Is he Serin? I didn't particularly like the fact that he couldn't keep his eyes off McCoy. Although I don't blame him...Agh, the time and effort you must have put into coming up with all of this, connecting the dots and all that, it's incredible! My mind is blown! Anyway, I hope you update sometime soon because I'd really like to see how it all wraps up in the end! Either way, it was an enjoyable read.
| Tishbing 11/18/12 . chapter 8
Also one other question, when did mccoy move in with spock? It said his quarters were listed as spocks? Mayne I missed it. Please keep up the great work!
| Tishbing 11/18/12 . chapter 21
Hmmm...the plot thickens! Why are they magically back at organia and why is mccoy locked in spocks quarters? I can't wait to find out!
| alana 11/18/12 . chapter 21
Wow, I really missed this story 3. Can't wait to see what is going on down on Organia with Spock and Kirk. I hope you will be able to put next chapter online quickly.
| shadow 10/21/12 . chapter 19
this is a great story, cant wait to here more.
wonder how bones and spock will sort this out, by avoiding it mabye.
| AllTheSnakes 9/16/12 . chapter 19
It's still coherent, and people are still in character.
Ah, and I've read three chapters in a row, to remember some things.
We had another scene in the rooms inside McCoy's brain: I love the dansel in distress idea!
I don't like Bones suffering so much, but I understand your reasons.
I hope you update soon!
| mtcbones 9/10/12 . chapter 18
theres hope for them now. yeay for spock you can do it bones. together you will make the best team and as the song goes the best friends.
| KatrinaJG 9/10/12 . chapter 18
Oh, good lord I somehow missed chapter 17 so I was a chapter behind and no idea what was going on until I went back and got caught up.
The dragon bit in chapter 17 was quite funny I thought, Spock in knight armour fighting a dragon, now's theres something that you don't see or read every day. I smiled at Kirk's changes at the end of chapter 18, as he was hell bent on keeping his sawbones.
Of course the larger question now becomes what happened with the klingons that made Kirk go back in time and warm himself? That's what I really want to know about.
Glad you updated and hope the next one doesn't take as long this time, but I understand if it does.
| Hella Jelena 9/10/12 . chapter 18
Oh goody, you're back! And you dedicated a whole chapter to McCoy's guilty conscious and Spock's comforting :-D .
"Statistically speaking, the likelihood of your inability to aim properly being more valuable than successful use of your phaser is insignificant. I do not relish the idea of you acting in any way as my defensive agent."
LOL! Spock can be so funny if he wants to - really dry humour. I always thought that a person of his intelligence must have a good sense of humour, even though he denies it most of the time (which makes it even funnier in away - more subtle).
"Do you believe that Nurse Sagumpta should be held accountable for her actions while subject to the Romulan's control?"
I love that also: Spock can easily follow McCoy's (illogical) train of thought, and trick him into discussing the topic. It shows on the one hand he knows McCoy very well, and on the other hand that he's able to relate, that he does have empathy for illogical, emotional humans.
"Spock brought one hand up to rest on the doctor's shoulder, then the other. It wasn't comforting in the same way his mother's hand on his head had been, but it was comforting. Spock's hands were warm; his chest was warm, and McCoy felt some of his despair give way."
I can so see Spock doing that. It's a simple but really comforting gesture, calm and sincere, without being overly sentimental. Perfect.
So good! Thank you!
| Avirra 9/9/12 . chapter 18
Love the crack about marksmanship :). Also nice to see that Kirk is fighting to keep his team together.
| alana 8/29/12 . chapter 17
I can't wait for the next chapter! I've read whole in 2 hours and I need more. Thank you for making such a addictive story x3
| Colgate Cavity Protection 8/5/12 . chapter 17
Omg, I'm loving it! I've garnered quite a liking of the Spones variety through these Dependancy sstories of yours and I can't wait till you update. And as for the murder mystery, brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Poor McCoy, hopefully he'll be okay. But what I really want to know are his thoughts on the Vulcan Kiss...that was a Vulcan kiss right? Wait, what am I talkin' about? That was practically a make-out session. LOL. Can't wait for the next update,continue soon. Bye!
| PutMoneyInThyPurse 7/15/12 . chapter 16
don't leave me too long.
| PutMoneyInThyPurse 7/15/12 . chapter 15
I was just thinking that it would be a fabulous twist to have McCoy be the murderer but too bad as it was impossible and now THIS...