I really liked this story a lot. Honestly, I can see the attraction to Silus, who does show humanity even under his cruelty toward women.

I never understood the vast attraction to Vulpes, however. Cesar, I can understand that, too.

I'm really enjoying the Silus pairing! I like your writing, it's very souther-flavored and fits well with the Fallout atmosphere of the Mojave.

I will just urge you to be careful when you edit/reread to watch for homophone usage and spelling. The mistakes tend to make the reading less smooth and readers end up reading the same thing multiple times in order to understand it and it detracts from the story.

Otherwise, excellent job! Going to add this to favorites :D

Great work on this vivid and imaginative story. Really interesting how you fabricated a wonderful story from a seemingly moot subject, the incarceration of Silus. Apart from trivialities like the occasional spelling error, this is a good story, but is there more? Great writing!

This is a pretty nice story-from an interesting perspective. Excellent pacing and dialogue

This is wonderful. All your stories are, but this one has Silus, so it has that extra little spice to it! :)

You have some spelling mistakes. Mostly little things, like words missing a letter - "you" when the text meant "your". "Waisting" when I'm positive you meant "wasting". Some others ones I'm upsettingly to lazy to go back 5 chapters and review over. But just that, little things.

You are such a great writer. I'm one to say I read yours for tips and new ways to explain things in my story. So take this praise and eat it up!

You keep at it, writing.

just glad to see you pick this back up. awesomeness.

you humble me...my screen name is totally stolen from Dan Simmons _Ilium_ which funny enough is a most epic crossover, AU, fan fiction in its own right.

I like it. Other than a few grammar errors, the story itself is fine. Can't wait for next chapter.

Where is the love for Silus? I'm really enjoying this so far...but I'm a sucker for your writing :) Hope you pick this back up sometime.