I really liked the storyline. :) I only wish you'd continue it and add into the plot, you know? I know I'd enjoy that tremendously... - :)

If Naruto went nine-tails to protect Naruko from the evil crowd and then swore to keep loving her even if no one else would after resummoning her in their remains that would be awesome.

Anyway, clones are a pretty convenient way to deal with multiple personality disorder, and for all purposes each personality is usually considered a different person, so he's not wrong there.

This was weird... But good. Any chance of it transcending
one-shotedness?

Sounds like a mental illness wonder the what The Hokage thought along with the team senseis

This is the only Story I read about i times - Yep you heard me right, so often it's not a real number.
And the only one I shed some tears even after the fifth time

Wow. Not what I expected, but really... dark, in a delicate calm sort of way. Really an interesting take on the idea.

Oh...my.
I love the pairing. Like Naruto, I cannot figure out why.
The ending was unexpected though fitting. Well... I say there should be some kind of jutsu where she really does exist. But that's just wishful thinking.
I like the story. It's a nice little kick and boost to my own inspiration.

You should make a sequel to this, or, maybe I can write something like a sequel, or even a multi-chapter story based around this idea... if I can motivate myself to write something...

Hmm, so is she a clone? Or something more? Who knows lol. Interesting story, I actually enjoyed it weirdly enough.

:c

It isn't just potential to be more than just a one-shot. Instead, it feels like a first chapter since, in the end, Naruto just ran away. In other words, the conflict is unresolved: What happened to his pent-up rage? What about the villagers? I don't think that this clash between them will be the end of it - if anything, it's just the beginning. People aren't going to stop hassling him, Naruto can't keep running forever. At some point, Naruto has to come to some sort of solution to deal with all the hate. Canon Naruto did this by having a goal to pursue - he'll become Hokage so people will acknowledge him. What would this Naruto decide? His rage at the end suggest the opposite of canon Naruto's conclusion, which is what makes it so interesting.

Even so...this is extremely good. This story is a disturbing yet entertaining look to a Naruto that could-have-been. It made my heart ache for Naruto and at the same time feel a bit happy that he managed to find love somewhere - even if it's from himself.

I love the idea and thanks for sharing. Please consider continuing - I will love to see what happens next.

poor naruto...naruko?...watever but you never gave naruto's brother a name

A very powerful story, I like it a lot. Very well written.

One thing is that it could just as easily end in him constantly re-creating the clone until he ran out of chakra, then start calling on the fox's... well, your ending is much more emotionally powerful, which I really like about it. This ending, while more... final, I guess, lacks that same power.

Nah, your ending is better.

So sad... Poor Naruto

I would love to see this story expanded. It is like nothing I have read before, and the idea is positively intriguing.