This is really good, I like it! It was a good read and I love the way Lynny met Jed. I hope you add more chapters to carry on from here. Can't wait to read the rest, if there is more :)

sweet...adorable...im bored now i wanna go off laptop...

This is amazing. The writing is just so captivating. I think you've got the younger version of Jude and Callum perfectly spot up, and Lynette is a lot how I imagined she would be before becoming ill. I hope you write more to this soon, I'd love to see how you go with it. Lynette and Jed's story is, in my opinion, one of the most interesting points of the book because we don't really know it. 3

Really like it, great idea :)

Love it!

Please update soon!