|Reviews for The King of Fighters XVI: Where the Heart Is|
| Guest 5/18/13 . chapter 11
Really wish you could update this.
| Lo-Drew 2/10/13 . chapter 10
Another solid chapter. Worth the wait my friend. KUTGW
| pier 1/13/13 . chapter 8
I'd have let King win against Yamazaki She's so charismatic
| The Weasel Boy 12/12/12 . chapter 8
Oh man. Even when they finally win it all, The Gorgeous Team still finds a way to lose... Big time. Still, who's to say that this is going to be the true end for them? (Sad to say this, but when it comes to most KOF fans I've met the death of any of those lovely ladies would honestly net more cheers than boos... While most of them STILL mourn the loss of Ash Freakin' Crimson.)
I have to commend you for creating such a sudden, dread-filled atmosphere in the second half of this chapter (Especially for a Fanfiction that's rated K!), though I think you could've had the fights in the first half go on for a little bit longer... I can't shake the feeling that they were somewhat rushed and only there to give the events in the second half of the chapter a sense of context.
On the whole though, it was a good little read. Now, WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER!? Don't keep us hanging for months on end like the wait from chapter 5 to 6! ;P
| Ikari 11/3/12 . chapter 7
This chapter is so beautiful...
i cant wait for next chapter )
| Princessa Rose Bernstein 11/5/12 . chapter 7
Leona and Hiroshi scene was very moving. They make a great couple, most of all because of Hiroshi's personality contrasts very well with Leona's cold and serious one. Mature and Vice were a surprising support for Hiroshi, they behaved like real sisters and they worry for his safety as well.
I loved this chapter and I'm eager to know what will happen next with the Orochi's seal or how Leona will behave towards Hiroshi after talking with Vice and Mature.
| Lo-Drew 11/3/12 . chapter 7
Very touching scene. Loved it though. Really highlighted the Leona/Hiroshi relationship as it shined through. Great chapter and can't wait for the next one
| Guest 9/29/12 . chapter 6
I was expecting a lot for the continuation... Thank you!
| Princessa Rose Bernstein 9/29/12 . chapter 6
Oh My God! Leona... Did Orochi Leona just kill him? Poor Hiroshi, he wanted to save her, he didn't want to leave her dealing with her cursed blood alone... I hope Leona, Mature, Vice and Adel would be able to save him.
This chapter was emotional, it was just... excellent. I enjoyed it very much and I'm eager to know what will happen next.
| Princessa Rose Bernstein 8/23/12 . chapter 5
Oh my God! Mature and Vice are suffering the awakening of their blood, and poor Hiroshi, that means that perhaps Leona will be suffering a Riot of the blood because of this? And I imagine Hiroshi would learn about the damages that cursed blood cause in her. Their encounter against Yagami was good, I can't believe he actually include Shen and Oswald in his team.
I enjoyed reading the final round, that Mature vs Iori was great, the whole chapter was well written and I loved it.
| Guest 8/13/12 . chapter 4
so far i have read the whole series and i love it. its nice to see leona getting some love too.
| Princessa Rose Bernstein 6/16/12 . chapter 4
Well, this was some of a chapter. The fight was very interesting mostly because of the talks between rounds. Diana always sees Kula as a daughter and that made her being a little paranoid with Hiroshi and Mature and Vice always acting as good sisters.
I can't wait to read the next chapter. Finally, Mature and Vice are going to face Yagami. Update it as soon as you can.
| Princessa Rose Bernstein 5/16/12 . chapter 3
I loved this new chapter! I was looking forward to it since a long time but, of course, I understand you've been busy like everyone is. Now, I like the relationship between Mature, Hiroshi and Vice because they are more united than before, and I loved that Team Desesperation Move.
Please update it as soon as you can.
| Psychoblue 3/28/12 . chapter 2
Right, so I was going to talk about this over PMs, but since your PM box is closed at the moment, I'll say what I need to here about this chapter.
It's great that you're continuing using characters from the other franchises, as well as continuing talking about the Slasher team when they sort of fell into the background in your second story despite getting right in Hiroshi's face. I'm guessing they'll encounter the heroes again this time? Just be careful to how many subplots you have running. Like, with the Southtown boss storyline from last time, I felt that as great as it was, it deviated a bit from the main plot with Hiroshi and Vice and Mature. Perhaps there can be a way to tie everything together with the main plotstring?
Speaking of Hiroshi, I feel that you've surpassed me in fanfiction OCs. Somewhere along the way, I haven't been as daring with those as maybe I should have, probably because I've lost faith in my ability to have OCs in fanfiction. However, I feel that you've done a wonderful job sticking to your guns with Hiroshi the past couple of years. Thanks to you, last weekend I decided to pull the trigger on a Street Fighter OC who before never got past "cameo" role. If you could check that out (the title is called "Suicide Circus"), I'd love your feedback on him because I think that you now have more tenure on these matters than I do. Who knows, perhaps someday we can do a CVS collab with Hiroshi and my two SF OCs highlighted in my oneshot?
Keep up the good work, as always, and I look forward to Hiroshi and Leona's developing relationship as well as more Nameless development.
| Princessa Rose Bernstein 3/25/12 . chapter 2
Hello! I'm leaving you my review, I liked this chapter, how you portrayed the relations, Shnobu's visit and the explanation of the main goal of Those From The Past. The reactions are well done and you know how to portray characters without falling much in the OoC, by Leona's side I can understand why she was so frighten 'cause if she could ever erase her Orochi side from her, she would definitely do it. As for Mature and Vice I would like to know how are they going to stop them.
Well, please update it as soon as you can.