End made me laugh :)

mom... i can explain!

Awkward...O.o

well ...that was awkward lol :D

loved this! :)

OMG! So funny!

LOL! The ending is just so funny!

I'm really new to the show, but this pairing is the one I adore above all. Not that I am stoked over the character of Swann mind you. I admit to immediately being drawn to Gold simply because he is witty, brilliant and calculating. He is not clearly evil and is very complex. Something about these two on screen just clicked for me. I immediately thought they would be a pretty interesting couple. I am devouring all the fanfics with these two that I can. :D

My dear child, this fic appears to be mislabeled! Surely you forgot the 'in' from Incomplete. As much as I love tidbits, this begs, pleads, insists for more. Seriously I beg you to reconsider revisiting this piece and teasing us with a bit more. Having gone so far and being interrupted, which one of them would have the most trouble trying to move past that interruption? I highly doubt it would be simple for either one and I love your take on their characters. I'd love to see the awkwardness of their situation explored just a bit more and the aftermath of what they were about to do. :)

caught by her mother oh Emma u naughty girl ;)

U should make this longer than a one-shot. Plz plz plz!

haha, OMG! POOR Mary Margaret! Still.. I think this should continue. Outside of the cell, perhaps?

Ha! :D I love this! I bet Mary Margaret is a little scarred for life, but I enjoyed the humor. :) Emma locking herself in and both of them fumbling for the keys was a golden moment. And, of course, the kiss.

Great job!

phantomphan

Good story. I like this little one shot.

OH! Poor MM! Oh my, isn't that always the way. Always interruptions. Funny though.

Omg, this is amazing... I died at the end. LOL It was nice to have a mixture of sweet and humorous, because that doesn't happen too often. This line was especially effective: "And he's right, I am forgetting, because I don't know how this started, or why we're here. I'm not rightly sure that we're even still in the cell. All I see is the dark depths of his eyes."

Very poignant and beautiful. Love your one-shots!