Wow, this is just... wow. Amazing. You captured the two of them so damn perfectly! I'm gonna be honest, if you were here right now, I'd would hug you in a non-creepy fashion. Please write more!

Isn't it fascinating how incest in fanfic, for so many of us, just makes total sense? This was beautifully structured and wonderfully written. It was touching (in every sense, I guess, at least for these gentlemen!) and romantic. I applaud that you did this so well, handling the taboo-factor without so well that it is impossible to do anything but sympathize with Sherlock and Mycroft. I would love to read more, should you make this fic longer. Perhaps a series of getaways?