Oh god, this just made my friggin day! I love Scout's imagination.

Soldier, that crazy nutter. I liked that little flashback to his teenaged years, it was interesting. The characters were written nicely; I liked that the Heavy wasn't portayed as being stupid.

Oh come on! You have to continue writting this story! Its too good to just leave sitting like this! Please? 3

Beautifully written story, this one. You portrayed the characters amazingly well, not even an ounce of OOC in them. It's like you're them instead of you when you were writing all these. Their non-OOCness is mind boggling. I could go on and on about how you portrayed the characters so damn perfectly I'd recommend it to anyone who needs a lesson in writing in-character but there are other things I have to say.

I also love how you included things from the 'Meet the...' videos like Sniper's and Scout's. Amazing how you incorporated Sniper's call and his lines, and Scout and his lines into your story. I think that Sniper's dad is a bastard. Sniper's too good and thoughtful for him.

Chapter 5: If I was asked how I thought Soldier was enlisted and how he went to his first fort, I'd tell the person to read this chapter.

Good job mate. :))

I wonder what the pyro will be like :D post chapter 6 plz ._.

Da!

Still waiting for pyro

Sir, I accuse you of having far too much fun writing the Soldier. FAR TOO MUCH.

Nah, just kidding, I can often tell when someone's been ENJOYING writing a story, and I can tell you probably giggled as much at all this Soldier-related silliness as I did. I will complement you on the fact that you have captured everyone's personality beeeeautifully. Normally I have a hard time getting everyone's voices right in my head when I'm reading it, but I noticed in the Sniper-and-Demo chapters that their voices were perfectly clear in my head. You especially managed to write the Scottish accent very well - suspiciously well. (ever read the book 'Wee Free Men'? 'Cause your Demoman reminds me a lot of that book)

I can't think of a whole load of criticism, apart from be careful not to drive this story too far into ridiculousness. Or, alternatively, drive it so far into the deep end you can't even remember what sanity looks like, only make sure to label your fic as crack if you do that, 'cause people like to know what to expect, just a bit. But maybe the very presence of the Soldier is warping the narrative. I wouldn't put it past the guy. Damn Soldier.

All I can really say now is I am SO looking forward to meeting the Pyro with your style of writing. See you next chapter!

Very good so far, I can tell you liked writin about soldier and I look forward to reading more.

That was indeed epic. And hilarious. Please please please update!

I lol'd

love everything about this story. the perfection in every mercinaries stories and personalities! Engie's gentlemen-ness, scouts implied innocence, medics medicalness (lol), and the fact that heavy is not the dimmwitted brute he is generally depicted as. there's so many stories on here that give the characters personalities that just arent right and slash two characters together like a romance novel. this is gold right here! keep it up! :D

0-0 that,... was,... ABSOLUTELY PERFECT FOR SOLDIER! :D i luv this chapter :3 btw luv'd how it ended. great job cant wait 4 da next chap. crab 4 u (\/)(,;,;,)(\/)

Ooooooh now thats funny right there

I think I just pissed myself I was laughing that hard.