great story!

Amazing story!
I think the climax and the last few chapters were dragged out a bit, but they were in great detail. The fight scenes were a perfect length!
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx

What a great story!
Now im curious as to what happens when they go to Dartmoth.

This story was absolutely fantastic and so well written!

Poor Bella, that 'dirt clump' tasting steak did not sound appetizing at all. At least Renee didn't seem to notice anything was off.

Interesting start to the story - the idea that Caius fears Aro. After co-existing for so long, it's odd to think of them as anything but united, however the fear angle gives a twist to their relationship that is intriguing, as is the hint of the 'other bloodline'

Great ending am hoping you go ahead and decide to continue this story into another booklike set cause you have a knack for this and I really enjoy reading what you be keeping an eye out for it.

awesome ending loved it

love this cant wait to read more of your work!

I do agree that trouble seeks Bella out...i mean that is kinda her thing...first james, Laurent, Victoria and the new born army, the Volturi are always there! I mean other than the story of love that Miss Meyer created there is the tale of a girl who is the damsel in distress, that was in my opinion the other main factor in SM's writing...and I think that allingoodfun has captured that incredibly!

So yes i think that even though the Volturi are dead and gone that trouble once again find Bella and the Cullen family. Because with the Volturi gone that means there is "free reign" over the vampire world and even though the Romanian's will more than likely take over again...there will be some bad ass vamp that thinks "I'm gonna make this world mine".

Also not to mention the new lives they are gonna have along the way. So danger will always follow Bella in some form or another...She is obviously better equipped to deal with it now.

awesome story, I stayed up 'till 11:30 last night reading this.

Loved the ending, will there be a sequel?

Nah! I don't believe that for once! Bella was only in trouble until the Volturi was done away with, then the Cullens will be ok.

Wow...what an ending and what a setup for the next story - "Danger always follows me…" Is there a continuation? I certainly hope so as I thoroughly enjoyed this one.

I'd like to encourage you to continue writing, as I found this story to be imaginative, yet in keeping with the characters in Stephanie's Twilight. Maybe a "what happens to Leah" and her (real) werewolf?

Thank you for a really enjoyable ride!

I AM IN LOVE! this is amazing