Thanks for the update. I check almost every day for the next chapter. I've really enjoyed this story.

This is great but I hope that there is a little more to this story. Like what happens the next day and where does Gibbs take her on their honeymoon.

I think the water fight was a super idea. I could picture the whole scene in Ducky's yard. I think that Ducky should of gotten the last throw of the water just for the spirit of the water fight. :)

I like the romantic touch to help Sam get her smile back and Kelly and Abby planning the party to also get her smile back.

This is true that kids can be cruel with other kids and those that parents are going thru a divorce will lash out on smaller kids. This was a great chapter. Thank you

This is great. Keeps you in suspense.

This was great. I like the way you had Sam tell her family that she was through with them because of the way they treated her in the past and Sam telling them that she has a new family and life now. That was great.

I think in this part when she realized that it was a dream and that she was remembering, she should of remembered that she left her apartment not sure if she had closed her door or not and Gibbs sending someone there to make sure it was locked up for her. Other then that it was really good.

The announcement party was great. I think bringing in their worse fears of weddings is good. Many people have fears as their wedding day gets closer and you have brought that out in this chapter.

This was soo cool. The way you did the wedding of Maddie and then going into their night together. I think the way you did it was so cool.

Hello, There are a few typo's but other then that it is getting really good on the story. Example of one of the typo's (He then went to his desk to each his lunch and plan his next move). I think you meant "He then went to his desk to eat his lunch and plan his next move".

This is really good. I hope that more comes from their relationship. I think I would of given a little hint that more happened that night after he told her about Shannon and Kelly. It sounded like things were going to go a little further. It was a great suspense. I am enjoying your story.

This was great. The team finally got to meet Sam and really liked her and she liking them. You made it feel and sound like one big happy family. Looking forward to more of your stories.

This was great. I like the name of Dr. Kelly Brackett. It reminds me of the show Emergency in the 70's. I like the fact that Gibbs in getting into a romance roll. Keep up the great work.

beautiful that they first night is in their own home