This was so good OMG I love it!

that was beautiful :') i loved it :D

Awww it was adorable and i didnt find it OOC at all!

beautiful and sad...I really appreciated the slight OOC because I really wish the authors would delve into Ethan's feelings a bit more. I guess monologues wouldn't really work, but your story was great!

I really, really liked it. My only problems were that it was a little repetitive at times (E.g. "I didn't want her to end up like my dad), but that's understandable, considering that Ethan felt as though he had felt Lena's pain before. Also, you were switching a little bit, from present tense to past tense and back again. Careful 'bout that ;). But other than that, I loved it! So sweet. Ethan Wate is my (fictional) boyfriend. Legitimately.

OMG I can't believe this wasn't in the book ... It's soooo fudgin good! :D