Good chapter, it's interesting you mention masons island, will you be updating that soon?. Liked the end part of the chapter, such a perfect chuck thing to do. Look forward to the next chapter

Lovers this chapter sooo much update soon it's AWESOME :))

Sweet chapter. Glad you're back. Certainly understand the lull...it happens.

These four beautiful people are just so romantic. I'm sure at some point Chuck and Sarah will return this favor to Ellie and Devon.

Looking forward, as always, for more to come. Thanks for all your work on this beautiful story.

Why would make Chuck feel so guilty about his fake break-up with Sarah?. At the time he had no real clue Sarah loved him.

Amazing chapter here buddy. Glad you are back. As long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading :) Keep up the good work and update soon.

Hey, you have no reason to apologize. If you don't feel like writing, then you don't feel like writing. If writing becomes a chore for you, then it will lead to worse chapters. Write when you want to, when you are in to mood to do so, not because someone is demanding you to do so.

Anyways, this was a perfect chapter full of the love those two have for each other. It's truly amazing and I love it.

until next time,

coreymon77

Glad to see a new chapter again, DC.

As always the chapter was amazing, the fluff and your Charah is nothing less then incredible. They're so perfect, and the love for eachother keeps on growing and growing.

All the kisses and the I love you's was great and you can't get enough of it.

The part with Sarah not being able to see Clara without go and show her love for her was wonderful and true. I can't wait for them to get parents but as I've said all the time I do like you dragging out on it, becaue when the babys are born they simply wont get all that time together and even though the good moments will proabably be the best ones ever the lack of sleep etc will be a hard part. And it can be hard to find time for just the two of them to express their love in the bed, cuddling or whatever.

Keep it up man!

Another great chapter. Keep up the great work, DC. :)

until next time,

coreymon77

Great chapter. Reminds me why I check for updates to this story everyday. Hopefully, you get your blood sugar issues fixed and you can get back to daily updates soon.

Good luck, and thanks.

just found this and have read it through. Its a very ambitious story, really well executed and its great fun. i particularly like the way every few chapters you pick on one of the many traumas from the canon episodes to address, apologise for and fix. it really brings home how contrived some of the plotlines were - how much out-of-character nonsense the characters endured (and not just in s3) that I mostly overlooked at the time because of the general charm of the show and the excellence of the casts' performances.

The only point i do take issue with is about half way through you mentioned how much Chuck preferred Sarah's new short haircut. Nearly had to stop reading at that point!

Glad to hear that your'e fine again, the story have been missed to say the least.

The chapter was great, it's always a bit hard to read about either of them going through torture or damage but I'm glad that he didn't get far enough to rape her though. And that she got the payback. The start of the chapter was just hillarous, laughed so much there.

Update soon! :)

I have to admit DC that what I find so fascinating is how they have been able to cope. To me their trails and tribulations are forgotten by the fans most of the time.

We always focused on what is in front of us at the moment and nothing else. However, as you step back and view their overall relationship at least for me it is amazing how they survived.

Just how many of us could watch the man or woman we love possibly have to sleep with someone for the greater good. Even just bringing them to their rooms that would be extremely tough. Of course than those missions where you have to kill or mane, possibly torture someone for information. If they had to do it in front of you or in Chuck's case where all he had was to listen to a name or symbol.

For Sarah it must be hell and very fearful that someone from her past or a name comes up and then Chuck knows everything. She would start to think that there is no way he would want anything to do with her.

It is taken her a while but she is finally coming clean about many of them. However, if I remember right she was an operative for 10 years. Yes she spent 5 of those with Chuck; however, she was called Graham's wild card enforcer for a reason. Her early years she would have wanted to impress. Remember how easily she killed all those people on Ryker's word. Sarah was essentially good but I am sure she did things that were borderline or downright horrible. I am trying to suggest that there maybe something where she crossed the line or where she acted impulsively that may have cost someone dearly that did not deserve it.

Either way magnificent job as always.

Thanks for this wonderful update DC. I do not know how I got behind so many. My appologies.

You know how much I like this story. You truly have done an exceptional job with it. Even your filler chapters turn into excellent character studies the show cared to explore. As usual kudos.

Great chapter here buddy and welcome back i guess. Glad you are back to good health. Keep up the good work and update soon!

So happy to see you back. Sorry, you've had a rough patch with the health. Take care of yourself.

Loved this chapter. Getting more back story, especially Sarah's, is always great. It's terrific how they support each other through each high and low. Glad Sarah got that story out and that she wasn't hurt any more.

Keep up the great work. Thanks!