I'm sure you've been told, but this was a tad quick for this to all happen. I love the idea and the writings good, but the plot was just gone in an instant and we both know Billy wouldn't give in without a fight. But otherwise I found it very good

Loved this! I was looking for some Roxie/Billy flirtation dialogue. Although I thought the kissing came a little quick, I thought there could be more banter between them. They are very in character though!

I love this. It is such a playful rendition of the musical. Billy is such a slick character and he will hustle anybody. It's nice to see the inversion of the two roles, or not inversion really, but the playfulness with which you write the characters. Anyway, I enjoyed it, it was playful, fun, and a good read.