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| japanesegirl101 2004-05-16 ch 1,  | abuseWhoa! That was creepy! But I love it! |
| Ali 2002-04-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseEeeeeeeeeee omg that's soooo kewl!!! I love the way you put 2gether your words. Your story really does catch the depressing poetry of DS. It seems like Maggie had become a skitz...and Josette is protecting Maggie. What an idea. And I loved Barnabus's reaction to her. A delighted shock, that she has finally became his masterpiece.....that's all she is really, just what he made her to be, but not her own thoughts. eeee anyway, I loved this story! Keep writing!!! :-D |
| eleni459 2001-05-29 ch 1, | abuseThe stoy is eerily beautiful. For a short story it is surprisingly atmospheric. I like it. |
| CherieValmont 2000-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautifully written! I must admit, I used to view Barnabas solely as a heel but now the guy's grown on me. Although, imo he DID manage to hurt her if not intentionally, then inadverdantly by locking her away and trying to force her into a life she never asked for. Had the chick recalled any of it later on, she would have needed LOADS of therapy thx to him. Love your writing style, tho. :):) |
| Raven 2000-04-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story was beautifully written! It captures the tense, gothic glamour of Barnabas perfectly. RSC |
| Cagey 2000-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is one of my favorite DS pieces -- lovely, haunting, eerie. I'd love to see this expanded some day (hint!). |
| ImperialGirl 2000-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved this one! I always thought Barnabas got a bad rap. . .he could call me Josette any time! Okay, it's not the best way to a girl's heart, but you have to admit, he's perisitent, and he didn't want to hurt her. And this is a wonderful way for Maggie to react. (10) |