What I particularly enjoyed about your story was hearing Jake speak about Bella from the heart. He was much more endearing in your story than in the Twilight series...you could feel his genuine affection for Bella.

Thanks for writing.

I really liked this one a lot. It was sweet, funny, and I love Jacob and Bella together. :)

This was so Funny! It was romantic and cute but so funny! I have to say it fit the characters perfectly! Jacob was just too cute. I felt bad that things didn't go as planed but it was kind of a stupid idea to begin with. I half expected Bella to swallow the ring and not notice. This was better! The guys are mean but Jacobs happiness is contagious! Good job!

Very sweet. And VERY Jake like. :)

Good luck in the contest!

Awww...very sweet and cute! Good luck in the contest! :-)

I love that you tackled a Jacob/Bella story in a predominately Edward/Bella fandom. And the outcome turned out well :) This was a lovely read. Good luck in the contest!