Great chapter! Lovelovelove :)

*melt* Oh, God. I knew the ending would be worth it, and of course I was right! I must admit that this last scene sounds like it could be put into another story, w/ another couple...but I'm sure you've thought of that, too. Or at least I hope you have! ;)

OK, well, I can't say I'm really a fan of Jose here, but I'm glad Paul is around. Yeah, I can tell this is going to be good! You know I love your endings! :)

Well, this wasn't exactly the scene I had pictured coming next, but I LOVE the last line! :) Looking forward to reading the rest!

Not having seen this movie (*hides*), I can't really comment on whether or not this is in-character. But knowing this wonderful author, and the usual path that these stories take, I can tell there's melt-worthy stuff coming! Yay! :)