Padding your reviews, consider it thanks for putting out a nier fic with over 1000 fucking words..

Loving your use of caps... Even though I'm a gestalt fan I still like that you put a nier fic out..

Story seems great so far :)
Cant wait till you bring out more fanfics of Nier, there really isn't enough

I really enjoy reading story and want to know, how things are going on between Kaine and Nier.

Cannot wait for the next chapter! There's angst but Nier seems to be working towards overcoming it... I hope that serious talk comes sooner rather than later. I'd hate to see things go completely south for these two.

I'd say thought that you have got one thing on the ages wrong. From what I can tell, Kaine is actually seventeen and I think Brother Nier is around that age as well. Not sure if you intentionally changed things up but hey. It doesn't detract too much from the story and it's easily sussed.

Oh, you utter tease! _ I hope Nier and Kaine manage to sort things out some time before Act 1's end. They're so adorable together. Poor Kaine, though. Nier's still shy about her "womanhood".

... Honestly, I can't wait until she dominates him with it. : 3

well couldn't blame Nier after all finding out there is this hot girl you like and the next moment or so you find out she is well...odd...anyway there were some grammer errors on here, but nothing that serious, if so needed, highly recommend have someone Beta your work, but so far, this is getting good. continue

this is touching indeed and to have Nier Accept Kaine as for what she is takes real guts too (in a society like this when you are far from the norm you don't get the same rights as anyone just cause you are far different). but to my point of viewing this, so far there are a few spelling errors but that can be fixed..keep it up

you know would be funny, Goku from Dragon Ball (not DBZ, the original Dragon Ball anime where he was a kid with little to no knowledge of the world beyond where he lived his entire life in) meets Kaine for the first time and touches her Privates (as a running gag he has never seen a girl before Bulma came about and often so he would touch people's genitals to tell whether their a boy or girl)

Need more! I love this story! And I like the idea of it becoming graphic! Keep it up!

You're doing a phenomenal jith this fan fic. I love it it truly captures what i thought kaine would feel like.

I love it. It somehow manages to be both really sweet and sexy at the same time. One or two structural issues - like moving onto a new line while a character is still saying the same line of dialogue - but that's easily fixable.

I hope Nier and Kaine get to take their relationship to the next level soon. : 3

And then? T.T

Chapter 7 is finally up. Thanks again for your patience. again, even if you guys have already posted a comment, it be great if you reviewed this chapter as well. Chapter 8 is alreay done, and wont post 8 till I have at least 4 comments. Let me know what mistakes Iv'e made, what you'd want to see later, etc. Thanks again.

Very enjoyable story, keep up the update please :) Love the inner thoughts going through their head