I liked this very much. You should continue it.

I rather enjoyed it. The fact that she found them lying was clever- it's a what-if part that you can change, that changes the whole rest of the play. I hope you write another story. And, I don't think she was hitting him in the abdomen...I think it was a little bit lower...if you know what I mean.

Twins but she gets one? That's... very like her. I'm a bit disappointed in the Baker and his wife, too, to be honest... I'll be following this.

I like this story. This is the most beautiful thing on the planet lol! We should probably put in an A/N saying that it's cowritten by us. It's so Beautiful, the end.