situation

Luna pls

Pinkie Pie just broke the Fourth Wall...

this storywas off the chain as in its very good i don't speak ingles

Would you care to know why most crossovers fail? Yours included?
Because you seem to think "I can merge both worlds, seamlessly and perfectly without my characters and plot turning to crap!"
And you can't. Seriously, you can't. It has never been done well, and as your story proved as of this chapter, you too have failed.
A good crossover only has a few small elements taken from one of the fandoms it draws from, a character here, an artifact there, and we watch as those small servings of chaos blossom out to create something interesting, something new.

What you've created is akin to a child banging together a few pots and pans and calling it music.

THAT HARRY POTTER AND MY LITTLE PONY CROSSOVER FANFICTION STORY WAS GREAT AND I HOE THEIR WILL BE A SEQUEL

this story is amazing XD

I imagined it... My brain is crying.

This alliance isn't worth the non-existent paper it's written on. Voldy's gonna regret this.

I. Loved it

Lovely! I like it! I like it alot!

castle - cattle
police - polite
top legs - fore legs (but you can get away wit ''arms'' because Harry was a human.)

Why do you end almost every spoken sentence with an exclamation point? It makes the characters seem like they're constantly shouting at each other.

hahaha knutless beggers, I see what you did there.

I agree compeatly, I quite liked this chapter.