I thought it was actually kind of cute and I could see Finn thinking this way-he's such a quiet character in the books. You have a few grammar mistakes such as "stood here" which should be "standing here" and "viscous" should be "vicious" but otherwise, I thought it was great. Keep it up!

I like it :) n it's written really well so yeh update soon ;D n I'm likin that puck is happy cos of Sean cos they r amazin together! Sorry for rambling but yeh it good :D