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| Reviews for Otani's Surprise |
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   VVvvvvVV 2/4/13 . chapter 9This was a short and hilarious story, Thank you for sharing it with the world of FanFiction. Wheter there where any faults or not I didn't notice as I enjoyed it too much although I did kinda stop at the sex scene going. Where the F is the missing condom.. Because no condom leads to pregnancy in most cases. |
| Kayla 1/2/13 . chapter 1 MOREEEEEE! |
| alex 12/30/12 . chapter 8 did you say this was your first story? because i liked it ,it was awesome you should make more and if you have countinue making more |
| sweetwithobsessions 12/30/12 . chapter 9 XD aww good ending |
| Den 12/3/12 . chapter 8 You did great! I really liked the way the story was progressing. It was a bit short though xD Keep up the good work! |
| Guest 10/20/12 . chapter 7 OMG OMG OMG UPDAAAATTEEE! |
| usuihentai727 10/22/12 . chapter 8 CUTE! LOVE THE END! Please continue! :D |
| Guest 10/19/12 . chapter 6 Update soon! |
| meghanmoo 10/21/12 . chapter 8 You should do a prologue of their wedding that would be sweet |
| Vongolafan16 10/20/12 . chapter 8 Ooh that was... Enticing i guess is what is called but anyways i think u should do one last chapter where its a time skip after college and that's when otani asks the PREGNANT koizumi to marry him XD. I WOULD SOOO LOVE THAT! |
| yumiulrichlovers 10/20/12 . chapter 8 I like your story and your lemon was good. keep up! |
| Vongolafan16 10/20/12 . chapter 7 whoa otani he was quick on his feet this time O.O |
| usuihentai727 10/20/12 . chapter 7 WOAH! THEY'RE GONNA DO IT! WHOOOHOO! FINALLY! XD No, but it's gonna get good! Please update soon! :D |
| Vongolafan16 10/13/12 . chapter 6 Bahahaha its impossible to believe that a college student does not know what that means! xD |
| luvabye 9/2/12 . chapter 1 wow! thats good! |
