|Reviews for Otani's Surprise|
| VVvvvvVV 2/4/13 . chapter 9
This was a short and hilarious story, Thank you for sharing it with the world of FanFiction. Wheter there where any faults or not I didn't notice as I enjoyed it too much although I did kinda stop at the sex scene going. Where the F is the missing condom.. Because no condom leads to pregnancy in most cases.
| Kayla 1/2/13 . chapter 1
| alex 12/30/12 . chapter 8
did you say this was your first story? because i liked it ,it was awesome you should make more and if you have countinue making more
| sweetwithobsessions 12/30/12 . chapter 9
XD aww good ending
| Den 12/3/12 . chapter 8
You did great!
I really liked the way the story was progressing.
It was a bit short though xD
Keep up the good work!
| Guest 10/20/12 . chapter 7
OMG OMG OMG UPDAAAATTEEE!
| usuihentai727 10/22/12 . chapter 8
CUTE! LOVE THE END! Please continue! :D
| Guest 10/19/12 . chapter 6
| meghanmoo 10/21/12 . chapter 8
You should do a prologue of their wedding that would be sweet
| Vongolafan16 10/20/12 . chapter 8
Ooh that was... Enticing i guess is what is called but anyways i think u should do one last chapter where its a time skip after college and that's when otani asks the PREGNANT koizumi to marry him XD. I WOULD SOOO LOVE THAT!
| yumiulrichlovers 10/20/12 . chapter 8
I like your story and your lemon was good. keep up!
| Vongolafan16 10/20/12 . chapter 7
whoa otani he was quick on his feet this time O.O
| usuihentai727 10/20/12 . chapter 7
WOAH! THEY'RE GONNA DO IT! WHOOOHOO! FINALLY! XD No, but it's gonna get good! Please update soon! :D
| Vongolafan16 10/13/12 . chapter 6
Bahahaha its impossible to believe that a college student does not know what that means! xD
| luvabye 9/2/12 . chapter 1
wow! thats good!