|Reviews for The Plan|
| Guest 6/7/13 . chapter 16
This is really good. I always felt the best way to redeem jack would be to pair him with a fan fav and destiny fits the bill. She seem like someone jack would fall for she take jacks wisecracking and throws it back at him but can see through his bravado and call him on his crap. Which i think he respects. Thats why i liked the early chapters the back and fourth the blunt honesty and hard truths they were forcing each other to face. You really give your characters demintion even chase isnt one note hes a bad boy so to speak but he is not all bad. Which abc oltl writers couldn't do they could be one note. Your charaters have layers u feel for all parties which keeps a story compelling and fans invested. Keep up the good work. Cant wait to see matt and des conversation about there relationship or how matt will react when the crap hits the fan. When jack gets caught how will he get des to stay and will matt take this as the opening to get des away from jack. Update soon. Your good.
| Ravensmom 5/27/13 . chapter 16
I love this one and I hope you keep her with Jack. I love the pairing of her and Jack.
| mmedicus 5/24/13 . chapter 16
I love your story...I actually like that jack and destiny are together...i hope jack tell destiny about the truth rather than from someone else.
| Yuhara Nao 5/14/13 . chapter 1
I'm so happy you're backkkkk! I'm not watching the reboot, after seeing the previews I think I'll pass. :/
Jack for god sake tell her! I want to shake this boy so bad and tell him it's better to be upfront about it than to let it hit the fan. At least he could get honesty points for behind dumb and since it happen in beginning and he dropped the bet soon after I think it would be in his best interest to be honest with her.
My OTP is back in effect. Lol no lie from the spoilers that turned out to be fake about the reboot, where Destiny was looking for a Sugardaddy my friend keep joking that it was going to be Jack. Lol
I hope toy finish this story and still decide to do the other Jestiny story, because seriously you're the only one that does this pairing and I love you for it! :3
| Guest 5/11/13 . chapter 16
YOUR BACK! AHHHHH Yay I never lost hope I adore this story pleeeeeassse update soon! Ever since the reboot i've needed this more than ever!
| PeaceLoveandLife 5/10/13 . chapter 16
It's interesting that you mention the way they've got Matthew acting on the new reboot. I don't really know what to think about the young crowd. Between their horrible attitudes and the constant partying so far, it's almost like a completely different show amongst that group.
Although neither boy is what I'd consider 'boyfriend material' for any girl, I'm really tired of Matthew's attitude in particular. I've noticed in these last few chapters (since he's returned home) that he's got a cockiness towards Destiny, like he's got her wrapped around his finger (which we all know he does) and it makes me think he's going back to his old ways of using her, only now he can't use "being in a bad place" as an excuse. I wish Jack would've just told the truth about the bet, because although he was an idiot do agree to it in the first place, at least he truly does care about Destiny (whereas I can't really tell anymore with Matthew). I think I'm leaning towards Destiny making clean break from them both for a while, but if I had to choose between both guys for her, I'd choose Jack.
| Gertie72 5/8/13 . chapter 16
Glad ur back. I missed this story.
| Mori 5/8/13 . chapter 16
Girl, I had given up on you ever finishing this story, so glad you started up again. Decided not to watch the reboot after hearing about that. Rather live in my fantasy word.
| Alliecattie3 5/7/13 . chapter 16
Well now! Can't wait to see how the truth sits with Des. Jack should've told her the truth about everything! Now, he's going to suffer the consequences for not being proactive! We'll see!
| Guest 5/6/13 . chapter 15
| nakala 5/3/13 . chapter 15
okay so you have to definitely update this fic and finish it i love it so much great great great
i don't want to wait you must start working on chapters
| nakala 5/3/13 . chapter 14
oh poor jack she pulls him from his dark side only to have her relationship thingy with matthew possibly ruin that
| nakala 5/3/13 . chapter 12
i like that jack has layers and him feeling like he might "hurt" des oh you did this so well
and the drama ensues
| nakala 5/3/13 . chapter 11
you are awesome this is really good
i really don't wonder when matt's coming back and i am dreading that dramatic moment when the bet is going to be revealed because i know it is which i still hope i'm wrong and there's just a love triangle when matt gets back better i don't want des to ever know about a null and void bet
and besides why would she be mad about him forfeiting and becoming waterboy for her basically
| nakala 5/3/13 . chapter 10
love these two