So happy that you updated. I love this series :)

All I want for Christmas is a new chapter !

So, do we get a holiday treat with an update to your story? I am ready for a good holiday story !

Any chance we will get an update on the story. I have to say I have enjoyed your work and would like to see this story continue. Just thought I would send on a word of encouragement - !

Can't wait for the next update. I'm hoping scotty makes an appearance soon. Love your stories, keep up the great work. Nappa-6

Was reading over some of the past stories you have written and wondered if you were going to explain - work into the story the issue of Cate and why she avoids alcohol? I did notice though that in some of the stories when she was dealing with harder issues she would have a "real" drink. Is this an aspect that will be worked into a future storyline?
Awaiting the next installment of your current story.

Everytime Jill gets on the track, she gets in trouble!

yeah another chapter! now keep up the good work! and no one can replace Bri, tiff or Julie they should just give up and go with just them 2. Can't wait for the next chapter!
S:)

Good to see your adding to the story here - have enjoyed your other CA stories and am looking forward to reading more chapters.

AngelJ5 - Any chance of getting an update to your story? I have enjoyed all of them and am looking forward to this, another good story.

AngelJ5 - Would love to see you continue with the story ... I have enjoyed all of your other stories and this looks to be another. Don't listen to the ugly reviews - as my momma said - consider the source, they must be jealous.

I just finished reading all your stories, they are awesome.. please update soon on this one. X

Great to see another story from my favourite fanfic author. Can't wait for the next chapters. Please don't make us wait too long.

Now. I did not want to have to come on to the review panel and comment to you or any other reviewer SW. However it would seem I have to. I would please ask you, and any others, not to use this space to carry out arguments of how you all wish to comment on the fics here.

In answer to your comments SW, I am indeed English, which you would know it you looked at my profile. We have a little thing known as English litereature that your American literature stems from and which has been changed to suit your language. This is fact and history. In English literature we do have different ways of writing prose. I was taught, at university level, to use single quotation marks for speech and double for quoting within speech. Are there other English writers that reverse this rule? Yes there are, but there is not a wrong or right way - you may feel differently about this and that is your right, it is whichever way you have been taught. My own university tutor and text books taught me and several others this way. I am sorry if this disturbs and upsets you, my only answer is that if it offends you so much to the point you had to create an account to comment, then please do not read any further chapters of this story. It is not my intention to offend others.

Now you and others SW, may believe that I cannot take criticism. This could not be further from the truth. In my profession as a graphic designer I take criticism every day, some is constructive and considered and some is just flat out rude and offensive a heck of a lot worse than your comment. And yes I would prefer that comments from any body were not written in caps as I perceive this as shouting and there is never a need for that. Criticism is fine as long as it is constructive and not an attack on the person. Suggesting a person's age for the reason the quality of work is not to your standard is not constructive, it is an attack. Please chose your words more carefully.

I, like others who post on this website, do it for the enjoyment of writing. If it so happens that when editing my work things slip through unnoticed then I apologise and will look at your comments and keep them in mind whilst I write. But understand this. I am English, I try to keep Amercian English in mind when I write and change my vocab accordingly. Not that you need to know this but I am also mildy dsylexic it causes few issues but there you are it is a part of me.

I have seen many of your comments before SW and seen you later apologise for it and explain that you were playing a part, not to be taken seriously. If that's your way of doing things fine. However the language you use to put across your point is considered offensive to others not funny or a joke. I'm not saying you should pander to people but perhaps you should consider chosing your ways of putting things across more wisely and be more constructive, not just come across as a jerk and rude.

If you wish to further comment here then so be it, I cannot stop you, this is meant to be a free world with the use of free expression. However I shall no longer comment back to you or others.

Everyone please respect this space.

Regards, AJ5

It appears your friends want me to prove myself. I have no need for that, I know what I am capable of writing. Can you not take criticism? Use quotation marks for direct speech and the single for indirect speech. Also so many run on sentences, please try to limit that when you can. I even took my caps lock off so this would look nicer for you.

Maybe you are British and have learned an entirely different way, I've seen this before and I have corrected many and they were very nice about it and thanked me. Studying American literature for six years has hopefully taught me enough where I can tell someone how to improve.

Have a splendid day.

- SWCRITIC