|Reviews for Gundam SEED: Divisions|
| Mordalfus Grea 5/18/13 . chapter 72
You do realize now that Stella is in the safe hands of NASA and is being reverted to a non-extended, Xander has no reason to fight for the Earth Alliance. With Neo is the care of the Archangel, command of Phantom Pain will be very iffy and Treize will probably attempt to take command. This would be the best time for Xander to break out and strike out on his own, his best bet would be to go to the Archangel
| darth-117 5/17/13 . chapter 72
logos has gone too far they attack two cities and all it did was bring the world upon them nice job,djibril you just sealed your cabal fate and,oh my god ANOTHER azrael does muruta have twisted family? Will durandal order operation angel down because if that's the case it could have political ramifications as orb is allied with NASA though durandal will use the"the are lawless pirates that think that they can do what they want with impunity" excuse when the are part of the AIT so durandal will have some cards to play as the archangel interventions caused casualties. When will teiria download into a body and pilot the virtue once again maybe he can lecture durandal on humanity's distaste of a higher authority and the fact that all humans have different degrees of reson.
| Findarato 5/18/13 . chapter 72
I get feeling when I watch your stories that you are making NASA, Seed Destiny characters and Treize too strong while making Kira, Chris and Especially Heero too weak than they should be. It makes story little less enjoyable.
I hope you are not going to make Heero Durandal's puppet and have Heero to fight against Archangel in angel down. It would be huge mistake.
| Final Genesis 5/18/13 . chapter 72
An awesome double battle - glad Stella wasn't in it this time! And damn - Hugh Azrael - a relative of that accursed Murata?!
This is Final Genesis, signing out!
| MWSeraph 5/17/13 . chapter 72
Congradulations on yet another chapter, Zaft Prime. The stakes were higher, but so was the teamwork and morale of the allied forces. Still, Djibril must have really lost his cool to send two Destroys, as if one wasn't bad enough. Also, it's time to see Mu and Nisha liberated from the identities LOGOS forced them to live the past two years.
It also looks like Durandal still had some sense to actually prioritize the defeat of the Destroy over his political games with the IAT. I'm looking forward to the lines being drawn as both reveal their stances against LOGOS.
I wonder how ZAFT and the Minerva are going to handle the political implications of attacking the Archangel later on, as the Archangel is still officially an Orb Navy vessel, and by extension part of the IAT. Lastly, is it possible for you to update more frequently during the week, other than Fridays, with summer coming?
Thank You and Godspeed, Zaft Prime.
| Navek 5/17/13 . chapter 72
That was awesome! A Destroy taken out by a freaking grunt suit! I wonder what'll happen to the Archangel and the Minerva now.
| Titanic X 5/17/13 . chapter 72
All I can say is...wow. You really took things up a notch here! I mean, come on! Two Destroys attacking two cities, and one of them is in Denver, no less? Now that was something I was NOT expecting! :P You really threw me for a loop. I liked how both battles played out, and I gotta admit, seeing the UN get involved in this fight was something I was hoping to see for some time now. That ultimatum will really put pressure on Djibril and his lackeys for sure! But the best part was the three ships working together to take down the one in Berlin. Gyunei may have been a real threat, but nothing can beat the combined forces of allies! :D
Also I loved their overall reaction to the UN's announcement. The world's leading organization has flexed its muscles, and the world is on a new path...
| Mandalore the freedom 5/17/13 . chapter 72
Got to say dude. You did a amazing job on this chapter dude. Really like the battle and it was interesting to see Heero Vs Treize there, and also glad to see that racist bitch Reccoa get her ass kicked. Hmmm wonder how will The Chairman will handle UN in this? Well till next time
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR !
| MWSeraph 5/16/13 . chapter 71
I'm glad that Durandal is realistically taking note of the curveballs by the opposition thrown his way. I can sympathize wtih him for his desire to see humanity live civilly with one another, however, where he goes wrong is that he is trying to usurp the divine role of God by trying to control humanity through genes. To do that, he wants to create social insecurity. In the end, he is nothing better than previous and current dictators who get the people to be dependent on the human state to satisfy their own ambitions. This is faith in ego and human science, along with distrust of people taken to extremes.
As for Durandal's reliance on genes and science, they are rather shaky and incomplete foundations to base morality on. They are empirical fields of study, that can only prove how the human body's basic life functions work. While DNA is a complex and wonderful design for study, we should not make the mistake of deifying it, nor should we blinded into thinking of ourselves as gods, like Durandal. DNA still fails to define morality and ethics, and why we think of such things instead of living like the wild beasts of pure instinct. Application of science without accountability to ethics or an omnipotent, all-knowing, and just power, such as God, can be easily usurped for evil or misguided intents.
What we see with Durandal is that he has fallen into the trap of worshipping human science and his own understanding, derived from humanistic values that often fail to withstand the test of time.
| Final Genesis 5/15/13 . chapter 71
Me thinks Shinn would change for the better now! Plus, I wonder how Yun-ass get his just desserts? XD
This is Final Genesis, signing out!
| KnightGunAnime 5/14/13 . chapter 71
I can see this will not end well for Djibril as he is basically digging his own grave by sending two Destroys to destroy Berlin on a fatally mistaken assumption that his brute force can force the IAT to cower in fear when more than likely, they will find perfect grounds from that to start a LOGOS elimination campaign. As for Chairman Durandal, he will have to tread very carefully now since the IAT will probably condemn him and his Destiny Plan for its violation of basic human rights on the basis that it is basically genetic slavery due to how it wants to determine a person's destiny through his/her genetic makeup. These two men just went over the edge with the ethical boundaries of genetic technology and abuse of military authority.
I do not why the Polish leader is still being a bit blind to the fact that the Blue Cosmos is condemning children as biological robots with the Extended programs under the veil of bringing money to economies. However, I am glad to see that most of the IAT agrees to label the Blue Cosmos as a hated terrorist group for violating human rights, that should have been done a long time ago even before the demented organization got hold of the political status prior to the 1st Bloody Valentine War.
Yuna got what he deserved for literally backstabbing Lord Uzumi. Uzumi's revival will probably be more than enough to revive Orb's spirits. I am pleased to see that Shinn has matured beyond his egotistical self and you have portrayed it well-done. I know for sure it will put a huge wrench into Durandal's messed up plan and Rey will have a difficult time to get Shinn back under his sphere of influence since the boy realized that even he, a super ace, is not immune to the military laws placed upon him. I think that it is a very important aspect of the military that the canon anime series should have covered, but failed to for reasons that are beyond me.
Another good note is how well you have portrayed Keller's reflection on how the United States hold itself accountable to perfecting the art of war to reduce the loss of civilians as much as possible and how dedicated they are to recovering the mentally damaged Extendeds in the ERP (Extended Recovery Project). The particular scene with Stella in the NBERC in San Diego is more than enough to comfort me that she is in good hands rather than the Earth Alliance in the original anime. It helps to reinforce the point NASA is trying to acomplish here. I also like how you described Dr. James to have the excellent qualities of a pediatrician that allow him to be the head of the ERP project and the NBERC that takes good care of rehabiliatating the Extendeds.
Overall, this is probably the best fanfic I have read so far and you have been doing an awesome job on balancing this story out. Please continue updating this story. Thank you!
| darth-117 5/11/13 . chapter 71
djibril has lost his mind he thinks he can cow the nations that have signed on to lead the world in a better than his genocidal madness it reminds me of that homicidal,racist dictator that use the Jedi's attempt to arrest him in order bring rise to a tyrannical regime that would make djibril nothing more than agitator and djibril finally discovers that his WPG is much smaller than the IAT an alliance of nations that has decided that the time of sitting on their asses is over and in the after math of logos attempt to burn a city in a IAT member state to scare the world back into the pocket of logos will backfire on them as those nation would launch a LOGOS elimination campaign that will cause durandal to rethink his options and with orb back in the side of the allied nations djibril won't have safe haven to flee to after the battle of heaven's base. really Poland's Representative defends blue cosmos on the ground of their benefit to their economy he/she need to get their heads out of the ground can't they see they used that money to create the extendeds there are probably are labs in Poland and guessing from the labs found all over the world logos bribed officials in those countries to overlook their actives it is a conspiracy to crate child soldiers meaning logos is destroying the race they are trying to defend.
| Massacrer 5/11/13 . chapter 71
Any chance to see that the next chapter could be done by Tuesday, and then the next one by Friday? It would be great if you can start doing two per week.
| MWSeraph 5/10/13 . chapter 71
You impress me yet again. Shinn's ego is definitely toned down, especially with his green uniform (less inviting as a target, unlike red). Djibril looks like he's about to pop his blood vessels, and Durandal's not so calm with Schenberg warning him. It also looks like the Archangel's seeing some real victories for once, with Cagalli still having friends in high places.
As for my questions, I can wait. I as a writer can understand the need for suspence; it makes it all the more fun in the end.
Take care, and good writing.
| 117Jorn 5/10/13 . chapter 71
Oh man, I am loving this fic so much! I just can't wait for THAT Arc to begin!