To the anonymous reviewer "Guest": No kidding? I never would have guessed.

Anyway, I think it's cute. I thought I was the only one who shipped Jack x Yamato :) I'm happy that I was wrong. Question: Who else cried when Yamato died in The Way of the Dragon? I blubbered like a baby. He was a jerk at first, but then he turned awesome in The Way of the Sword XD

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This is really promising :3 I like your idea in this but you should have continued it a little more. Then it would have been perfect. I actually like the pairing.

woah... you made yamato gay? i find that really strange... :) never thought of him in that way before. actually, i never thought of him falling in love at all. he seems like the type that have no emotions at all. :)

dude thats gay

If your ever going to carry this on- I love it! :p

I think its cute. Its an awesome even though it was short i still luv it _ Nice Job XD I hope more stories come of this couple hehe _