Oh my god. This is WAY better than the original ending! Two culprits, and a way better motive the original one of Anja being jealous and spiteful towards Markus. Great job!

Oh, this is quite an interesting twist. I like it better that two people are in on it since, in the game, sightings of the monster and Anja are a really too close together to realistically be the same person. Good job!

WOW! This is wonderful. IT's rather dark but that fits. I'm not going to lie there, but it is beautifully written. :)