Well Rogue-Scholar-Blue, yet another well-written, captivating, and exciting fanfic. MECH turning around and lending actual aid for the future? Now there is a new one. And Crosswire just will not stay dead eh? At least not by anyone save the author. I am greatly saddened by the posting in thy bio of having lost the fire to complete this fantastic series, but I am still thankful that all the stories posted are at least complete and none have been left as dead fics. There are not nearly enough Arcee/Jack pairings that are as well written as they should be, nor are there that many at all unfortunatly. I would certainly hope that this series might be completed in the future sometime, but regardless I enjoyed my time reading it. And for that, my thanks.

Well, i guess that's in for Crosswire, though Jessica's situation isn't looking good either, and Jack is on the date from hell :p

Seems like Arcee is the only one who's had any luck this chapter :p

So, is this the end of Crosswire?
You are certainly making Jessica into a complex character. No simple villain is she.

And now would be the time for four letter words...
Another excellent chapter.
The building tension between Arcee and Jessica is both amusing and nerve wracking. What will the already world weary Arcee respond with when Jack's been duped by another female?

An excellent chapter, i'm starting to wonder who is going to get jack first, Fowler's people, MECH, or that other guy (can't remember his name)

Though Jack won't be pleased when he finds out the truth about Jessica.

Great Chapter!.Story keeps getting the chapters coming!

Nice chapter.

I was wondering how long it'd take Arcee to figure Jess out, she almost had it too.

Nice touch on the dream scene, heh, though i doubt Arcee would like hearing that he imagined an equally almost naked Jessica there with them, if he ever tells her about that one.

Though i can't imagine he'd be thrilled when/if he learns the truth about Jess.

Maybe she and Jack can try the Cordial Psychic Patch again, so she can see what he's dreaming about (and give him insight on his visions of Primus)

Arcee is one sharp cookie. As Jess will find out if she is a danger to Jack.

Yup, no rest for Jack with those running through his head.

A most excellent update! Great plot and character progression, nice couple of twists and turns you threw in there, and of course, awesome gratuitous beach scene. ;) I get the feeling things are going to heat up soon ( in more ways than one!) and I'm really looking forward to it. _

Thanks for writing!

Eee! Once again I keep forgetting that this ISN'T the latest season of Transformers Prime with the sheer awesome that's leaping out from the pages that you write! Loving every minute of it, and gripping the edges of my seat, but I can't help but wish that at least ONE date or outing wouldn't be interrupted with mortal danger/annoying people/random act of nature for the poor duo.

Nice chapter. :D

During the conversation at the beginning, when Jack mentioned how it wasn't a good trip for them if they weren't attacked, I could just imagine him adding something like "If this is what our dates are gonna be like, I hate to think who will crash the wedding." :p

I'm starting to warm up to Jessica, I wonder how much Jack will tell her about him and Arcee before she shows her hand.

love all of this series

Another great chapter.I hope their's more romance between Jack and Arcee to come...But can't wait for more

*squee* Excitement! Danger! More people wanting Jack Darby than you can shake a stick at! Though at least it's for his mind... ;)

I can't help but wonder if Jack's natural charisma will sway our lovely MECH infiltrator to his side? I suppose I'll just have to stay tuned and find out! D

Another great chapter,getting better with every 't wait to read more