|Reviews for The Child Thief: Sekeu's Return|
| Edhla 1/11/13 . chapter 1
Disclaimer: I'm not familiar with the fandom, sorry.
This is a nicely written piece though, and your dialogue in particular is strong. No egregious SPaG issues either, which is always good to see... with the possible exception that the beginning passage starts in the third person and then abruptly changes to first with no indicators, which I have to admit was pretty confusing.
That said, I really enjoyed reading. Well done :)