Enjoyed this! Well written, though sadly short chapters :)

bearable...

Oh you tease! How could Bluebear refuse to go to Wolperting or Bookholm? I suppose the promise of seeing Nightingale will have to do for now ;) if only the Trogotroll would intercept them on the way to Florien!

I have a feeling that this bacteria is going to be a hard one to get rid of. I forsee many adventures ahead interspersed with shenanigans. I can't wait xD

YIEQ

PS Your summary says I hope you can "bear" with it. Intentional or unintentional pun?

Oooh yay - a longer chapter as promised :D

I much enjoyed this chapter despite the impending doom of the bluevriel relationship (love that adjective bluevriel btw). Though of course if Bluebear gets his head on straight hopefully it won't come to that. I mean what an idiot haha it is clear Avriel is afraid Bluebear is having an affair! Ah wells as you summed up so nicely in that paragraph, Bluebear is a bit of an idiot when it comes to ones feelings. I enjoyed the line where you noted that it was difficult to deal with you own feelings let alone somebody elses. Lolz I do agree with that sometimes. Anyway, I am very curious to see what Bluebear and the Germ will do now. Maybe take a trip to bookholm to read up on bacteria? Haha.

Best line: you've buggered it now mate.

Update soon!

YIEQ

Dun dun dun. The plot thickens. How does one get rid of bacteria on the brain? The world may never know...

I immensely enjoyed the City of Dreaming Books shout out. Have you read all of Walter Moers' books? I have but I never find other people who have heard of him, alas. Anywho I think he's brilliant.

Do update soon, you've left this at a bit of a cliffy.

YIEQ

So weird, but oh so good! Granted this is Zamonia so the weirdness is to be expected. You have such humor in your writing: "bacterium has broken up many a relationship before" "I'm growing on the brain of a chromobear, we all have our burdens".

I'm feeling a little bad for this lonely bacteria.

YIEQ

Bwahahahaha

"I think I'll go foraging" - "maybe the zamonium is back" - "telepathic Muggroom ray"?

Too funny.

Loved the Azriel Bluebear banter. You are doing an excellent job setting this up - I am even more intrigued. And your writing is lovely. You make me like your story in spite of the short chapters, which is an accomplishment

YIEQ

Hahaha this is wonderful! Great dialogue and very intriguing narration. The spell of the Muggrooms haha. Seriously, I love you for posting a well written, on topic captain Bluebear fanfic. As you don't have the reviews you deserve at the moment, I will try to fix that ;P

YIEQ