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| Reviews for Rainchecks and Strawberry Jam |
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   KYTIVAFAN 5/29/12 . chapter 2wow! you do Tiva very well! |
| Anonymous033 4/30/12 . chapter 2 Yeesh... Now I REALLY think you should ship Tiva! Just reading the last paragraph made tears spring into my eyes (I mean, I read the whole thing first, but it's important that I emphasise that you moved me to tears lol). And I loved their little make-out session. I also loved the way they reacted when he discovered her scars ... it's so in character and so haunting. Her embarrassment, his horror at having given her the wrong impression... I love what he said to her. "You don't see that you're a goddamn tiger, Ziva?" Favourite sentence :D Or maybe this one! "... And Tony knows that for the rest of his life, he's never going to be able to smell strawberry jam again without reliving this moment and getting as horny as hell." Just because, haha. Really enjoyable read. Thank you for writing it! Soph |
| Anonymous033 4/30/12 . chapter 1 Well, now... Maybe you should start shipping Tiva, haha! No, I'm kidding. But I enjoyed reading this. I love Tony's thoughts in this chapter; very in character, I think, and it's refreshing to read something that's written this well. And now I'm curious as to what a mezuzah is (not asking; just commenting). Lovely chapter! Soph |
| Alidiabin 4/17/12 . chapter 3 *smirks* I really want strawberry jam now. Wonderful. I don't see it as cliche, but I don't read too much smut. |
| Alidiabin 4/17/12 . chapter 2 Lovely. I liked seeing Ziva in her natural environment. And yum strawberry jam. |
| Alidiabin 4/17/12 . chapter 1 I've been busy studying and making out, so I haven't been able to get to this. Better late than never. For a non-shipper you portray their relationship very honestly. Their fear of being rejected. And their concern for each other. |
| dvd123 3/29/12 . chapter 3 Heehee, the imagery of the strawberry jam is really strong. :D I personally prefer grape-flavored more. :P We never get to see enough of the post-Somalia effects that it had on Ziva on the show. :( I would think that she still has some of the scars, but they're just hidden. Their extra close snuggling. 3 |
| Robern 3/29/12 . chapter 3 very good. |
| Anonymus 3/28/12 . chapter 3 Ahh, mood killer! Screw you. -_- |
| Anonymus 3/28/12 . chapter 3 Ahh, mood killer! Screw you. -_- |
| NCISgurl805 3/28/12 . chapter 3 Beautiful, dahling, beautiful! :) |
| aquasm 3/28/12 . chapter 3 I was hoping you would keep going with this story, you have done the characters very well |
| Mechabeira 3/28/12 . chapter 3 SO true to characters. Nice work. |
| Miss Suave 3/21/12 . chapter 2 Gahhhhh! Please update! :D |
| easylion 3/19/12 . chapter 2 Aah great! Love it! |
