|Reviews for In the Debris|
| namemeamy 1/31/13 . chapter 37
Very good read. Lots of unexpected little twists and turns. -Amy
| Wardrob07 1/31/13 . chapter 30
They are so cute, I can't... :)))))
| Wardrob07 1/31/13 . chapter 27
Awwww, me too. Poor girl, she really deserved to have her little piece of paradise, on the road, alone with love of her life... even if that road leads her to hell I'm sure this journey will be one to remember :D
And Edward, of Edward...I feel for him too, I knew it won't be easy, now he is questioning everything, so many doubts, insecurites *sigh* I'm glad Bella is understanding enough though
| Wardrob07 1/31/13 . chapter 25
Wow, Carlisle was so cruel, I still can't believe he's done that to Edward. I hope Edward manages just fine, but it won't be easy, especially when you get used on certain things in life, losing them ought to be hard. I'm all for love, but I hope this doesn't interfere with his relationship, I mean his bad mood or overthinking the situation...He seems mature enough but he is still a boy, this is just one more lesson in life... Can't wait to see how he copes with this
| namemeamy 1/31/13 . chapter 31
Bella did the right thing, not allowing herself to be a part of this experiment between
Carlisle and Edward. It's just really sad, because here is this kid, who has l
| namemeamy 1/30/13 . chapter 23
| namemeamy 1/30/13 . chapter 21
He's trying so hard to a good person for his brother, for Isabella that he doesn't even realize how good he is. The scene in the bedroom, the boys talking about their mother? It killed me, especially because I lost my dad when I was little, and you do forget, even though you try not to. I want to hug the both of 'em.
| namemeamy 1/29/13 . chapter 17
I'm thinking maybe James really did tell her he loves her while she slept.
| namemeamy 1/29/13 . chapter 16
Smiling. Glad they made up, that he got through to her and "more than friends."
| Wardrob07 1/29/13 . chapter 20
I like these parallels between all four of them. I'm glad for Bella and Edward, my heart is full now, they were so cute.
I wish Victoria gets her 5 minutes of happiness here as well. Please don't make James' father be her father too, that would be so cruel.
| namemeamy 1/29/13 . chapter 15
What kind of person can sit there and essentially tell his children that he never wanted them?! I kind of wish Edward would've hit him, not that that would've solved anything.
This made me really sad.
| Wardrob07 1/29/13 . chapter 19
Just kill me already *sigh* Poor Victoria, poor all young, troubled, confused hearts. I wish James talked more with her, this heartache could have been avoided but I'm glad they are still trying...
On the other side, Bella is totally confusing Edward, pretending to be in charge and all that, okeyyyy ;)
| namemeamy 1/29/13 . chapter 10
Okay, so the whole "Forks Gang" conversation made just made me laugh. Also, I hope the lavender works on Edward. He's so gonna buy Bella that camera, isn't he?
Victoria...you know she's usually portrayed as awful in other stories but here, she's just a lonely girl. It makes me want to hug her. I hope Mud stays the hell away.
| sosueme 1/28/13 . chapter 36
This is one of those novels that stand out as extraordinary to me, yet i am shocked that the review count isn't much, much higher. Love the way you are pulling this all together.
| sosueme 1/27/13 . chapter 37
Loved this tale so much. All the characters, their paths and struggles and triumphs. The plot was interesting w a good number of twists and slow reveals. Carlisle was CD complicated but I loved what you did w him. Thanks for sharing your talent.