aw, well written, gramitically correct (though I never said I was hence the awful spelling :P) and so romantic! I loved it!

Nice story.
I also believe Jane is a very interesting character so I'm glad you wrote this :)

q.q its so, so adorable at the end. *melts into a puddle*

Just lots of love well written, my dear.

Awwww.
Nice how Jane saw the gorilla as an intelligent, feeling being instead of a mindless savage. And nice how Jane pitied the animals in the cages of an old-fashioned zoo.
Liked how Jane and Tarzan get along.

this was very well written, bravo. i would definitely enjoy more from you

This is very, very cute. Great writing, love how you tell parts of Jane's story. Absolutely adored the ending. Seriously.

Keep up the great work!