| Reviews for Four Plus One |
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Whiteling 1/16/13 . chapter 10Part I liked from what might've been: options a b and d. |
Whiteling 1/16/13 . chapter 1I liked endings one, three and four :) |
OmNomNom 11/6/12 . chapter 11 Ok, is anyone else seeing the irony here of Taylor Swift kissing someone in the rain? xD |
Guest 9/15/12 . chapter 15 how about something like Once-ler wodering why Ted looked familiar or vice versa or Ted wondering how Grammy knew so much about the Once-ler and something about where the lorax came from or how he was created |
summerrayah 9/15/12 . chapter 14i love this fic, its always amazing, and how about four times the lorax almost came back, and one time he did, or something like that, |
Kei White 9/13/12 . chapter 15This story is beautiful and I like how you've done it. |
beanie-art1 8/23/12 . chapter 15Oh wow your writtongs brilliant, I really love these stories. I thought of an idea for another story ( I couldn't really think of a happy one but il let you know if I do think of something) I was thinking after reading the chapter of the 4 other visitors to the once-ler, before ted. I thought that Mabey o'hare, after visiting the once-ler and failing to get him to join him, he would try by any means to stop the once-let's attempt of giving away the last seed ( hence the distruction of the factory and the walls around town) Just an idea I had :/ but anyway great writing and please please please make more stories :D |
Justsimplespeed 8/19/12 . chapter 15So after being the annoying person who reviews all chapter in one boring night, I gotta say I love these :3 and I do hope you make more somewhere down the road of LIFE :3 |
Justsimplespeed 8/19/12 . chapter 14I love the last two lines, and I don't even know whyyy |
Justsimplespeed 8/19/12 . chapter 13skjgbalfba. Life sucks XD |
Justsimplespeed 8/19/12 . chapter 12oooo. I think this one(s) might have to be my favourite :o |
Justsimplespeed 8/19/12 . chapter 11*Hugs Once-Ler* |
Justsimplespeed 8/19/12 . chapter 10OH HEY. I wrote a one-shot just like these. cool beans 8) |
Justsimplespeed 8/19/12 . chapter 9The last one is so cute :3 |
Justsimplespeed 8/19/12 . chapter 8PIPSQUEAK D': |