|Reviews for Under the Influence|
| Bamboozlepig 4/8/12 . chapter 1
Finally got a few moments to sit down and read one of your stories and I chose this one because we just had a case last night in our area where a drunk the cops had picked up busted out one of the side windows of their squad...with his head. People do the dumbest things when they're drunk and your story does an excellent job of pointing that out. I particularly liked the final scene with the girl falling into the garbage can because I could just SEE Pete trying hard to keep a straight face as Jim cracks up..good bit of comedy there. You're definitely a good writer and it's great to see some new stories getting posted in the fandom. Again I welcome you to the site and hope that you have more stories planned for us!