Awesome. Please, keep this up. I'm looking forward to more from you.

Phenomenal writing skills. Excellent represenation of Samus and her experiences onboard Orpheon. Wonderful incorporation of SAAR. Please finish! Or can I help you finish it? Name's Fisher, email:

Loving it so far. I think how Samus reacted to SAAR in the beginning was funny. Keep it up.

you say you'll update in the next few weeks, almost a month before

This is pretty good. Any chance that you're going to continue it?

I really like your writing! It doesn't feel awkward or weird when read and your descriptiveness is great! I really want to see this story finished.