It's spelt Arthur.

A Great start, Can't wait to read more.

Interesting story thus far.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

enjoyed reading this chapter

I would have to say that I was kinda surprised. You left off at age 11 or 12, and now he's 14? And what allowed him to actually get broom companies all on his own? Kinda frowning because you have it so that Lily's already dead in this chapter. I was actually thinking that you would have him spending time with her.

so does harry have his canon self's memories up to when voldemort was killed? or do they end sooner?

I will say I was originaly interested in the story but even if something in fanfiction is oc there is a reason for it Molly doesn't act at all in character but you give no reason for the change at all the moment she left Harry with her kids she would be flooing dumbles. I just can't accept a change from one of dumbles biggest fans without a reason why I cant even fathom how there personality could change so much and you don't explain it I thought the story may go in a interesting path but I just can't get into the mindset.

enjoyed reading this chapter

Another great chapter!

Continuuuuue,

Z.

You have my attention. Awaiting more.

Looks like a great start!

Continuuuuuuuue,

Z.

interesting...and possible... to see is progression.

pretty good

Harry Potter isn't one my favorite story plots, but I like your writing and how you change the original storylinies. I hope to see more of your work.

Lily Luna is Harry's 'daughter' not mother.