|Reviews for Feeding the Wolves|
| ItsAMundaneTragedy 6/12/13 . chapter 37
I just wanted to tell you was that I LOVE your story! You fit Harli perfectly into the story! I started reading this about a day ago I couldn't stop reading it! Its a fantastic story that was written amazingly! I also like the evolution Daryl and Harli's relationship has taken throughout the story. I cant wait to keep reading you upcoming chapters! Good luck!
| H.Chris.H 5/26/13 . chapter 36
Some sweet moments: Daryl with Martinez; Andrea and Harli and Dare I say Daryl and Harli...Howt damn.
| H.Chris.H 5/26/13 . chapter 35
Greg, Greg, Greg...smh well at least they have an extra set of keys ;) Always love some positive Merle interactions and that Daryl and Harli are back on the mend.
| H.Chris.H 5/26/13 . chapter 34
Realistic reunion with Daryl and loved the Merle chat. Props to Carl, insightful lil' man cub.
| Guest 5/21/13 . chapter 38
Your story about Harli being a mechanic lead me here. I love it. I really do. Its amazing. I can't wait for the new season &I new updates.
| kilah234 5/7/13 . chapter 38
Bleeeerrghhhhfummmmgppoowwereeec. Like yea. So, letz see, I really like, no, love this story! There are a few grammatical errors but who cares, Harli makes up for it! I like how you incorporated Harli into the Walkng Dead and stayed true to everyones characteristics. Especially Daryls. Anyway can't wait for the next season, right? (For both this and tv) but again, lovely story, lovely writing. (v)
| Follower 5/6/13 . chapter 24
Hi, I just want to say what I feel about your character, Harli.
I think that Harli is displaying characteristics of a mary sue. For example, everybody she talks to would like her (except for Andrea, because Harli was aggressive to her), and this is in spite of the fact that she had no friends and was a loner throughout her time in university. It is contradicting to see how Harli, or anyone for that matter, can gain such social skills as evidenced by her interactions with the Atlanta group. Besides being well-liked by people, she is also a strong zombie killer, is smart, and does not make any mistakes.
I fear that you are making her out to be too perfect, so I would suggest introducing some flaws to her. Maybe make her at loggerheads with Carol (since you don't really like Carol? You can do a bit of Carol bashing there :P But take note - A BIT.)?
I know this is not music to your ears, but it's my honest opinion.
P.S. you use the word 'quite' when you want to show that the surroundings are silent. It should be 'quiet'.
| Mione788 5/3/13 . chapter 38
Love Love Love your story. Wonderful writing! You really stay true to the show and most importantly you stay true to Daryl's character, i really believe that if he were to have a romance in this show it would be long and drawn out as he is not used to being loved and such. Oh and Harli is awesome love the name and love her personality she really fits daryl perfectly! cant wait till october!
| wiccan-jessica 4/30/13 . chapter 38
Great work can't wait for the Nxt season to start!
| loony4lovegood 4/28/13 . chapter 38
This was one of the best fanfics I have ever read! :)
| GetTraught 4/20/13 . chapter 38
I have fallen deeply in love with this story and your writing. It's so well written. I love Harli and she is now my favorite OC to be shipped with Daryl. I actually feel like she could be a real character in the tv show. I also like how you wrote their relationship as not being completely official because sometimes those stories kind of just lose my interests a bit. I also thought I might mention that this is the longest fan fiction I have ever read. Usually my limit of words are around 120,000 words but as soon as I started reading this story I knew I was going to enjoy it and I was so right. I have been continuously reading this story for the last two days. I would've finished earlier but I had school. Sadly. I can't wait to see what happens in season 4. Apparently there is supposed to be another time skip but I'm not sure how big it is. I am now going to be waiting for October alot more eagerly now. See you then :)
| ThereAre666Ways2Love 4/15/13 . chapter 38
Awwww I loved this story so much!
| Oceanbreeze96 4/11/13 . chapter 1
This is one of the best stories I've read on Fanfiction. I loved watching Harli and Daryl interact with each other, and I think Harli is an awesome character. You are an amazing writer. Can't wait till October!
| Nai-Reedus 4/9/13 . chapter 38
I'm sad to see this go till october, since this was the first TWD story I ever started reading. Nwayz! tnx for a great ending.
| WinterIsComing01 4/9/13 . chapter 38
Really sad about Andrea. Which is funny because anyone who knows me knows I really didn't care for her this season, although I did like her in season 2 (sort of). But her death really made me sad, and actually annoyed be a bit because she doesn't die in the comics. In fact she goes on to hone her skills and even becomes Rick's lover (random but ok I guess). And now AMC goes and kills her off? What in the devil? I thought her death was really sad but I didn't understand why they chose to kill her off before she even had a chance to reclaim her position in the group. Super annoyed. Anyway, you did a good job of capturing the emotion here and it made me sad all over again.