|Reviews for Lily Risk Her Butt & So Does Band Camp Girl|
| Party-Shoes16 4/7/12 . chapter 1
It's a good story, and I think you defiantly have the right attitude for your characters.
One suggestion though would be to read your story again. It may just be me, but some parts were a little confusing. I thought at one point she had on panties and then she didn't . Then out of no where she did again.
Also, did they really break up in the show because I think I may have missed that part. I'm just wondering.
| CTgirl14 4/6/12 . chapter 1
please update soon. I hope Brad gets his revenge. And im gonna private message you to tell you more of my opinion
| WolffiesProtector 3/17/12 . chapter 1
i think you should allow Brad to add his revenge too, it'd be a nice addition to the storyline in my opinion, but so far its a good and intriguing story
| wandamarie 3/13/12 . chapter 1
wow it is a good one thanks keep up the great work