|Reviews for MapleStory: Warrior Brothers|
| CaptCookie 7/8/12 . chapter 17
:O Who's gonna win?
And... NOOOOOO! You HAVE to continue this story! It's funny, and entertaining!
| CaptCookie 7/8/12 . chapter 6
My. God. This. Chapter. XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
| iAmTheTot 5/2/12 . chapter 1
It was a pretty interesting opening. Not terrible, certainly not terrible. I kind of agree with another reviewer that the battle sequence could have used more gusto, more description.
Other than that you actually seem to display a good understanding of the language, I only noticed a very small handful of spelling and grammatical errors but hey, we're all human.
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 9
Can't wait for the next chapter. How could you leave it there? ;)
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 8
OMG. I hope team nine don't fall into the trap! On to the next chapter!
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 7
Nice reference to Pokemon. :D
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 6
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 5
My favourite chapter yet. It was a nice length and written well.
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 4
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 3
LOL. Nice chapter progression.
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 2
Nice dialogue. I like how you don't overdescribe things.
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 1
| Cytonic Flames 3/28/12 . chapter 7
Pokemon reference! FTW! Been reading this story for awhile now.
| Zerhai Dragonspirit 3/28/12 . chapter 1
Ok first off I have never seen or played maple story so it is hard for me to relate to it, your fighting scenes are a bit awkward, and honestly the way you used the lines to break it up was confusing as well. Your descriptions are okay, though they could use a bit of work, the whole chapter feels a bit choppy as a whole. Though it gives enough at the end of the chapter for me to somewhat read the next chapter. Though my confusion with it stops me.
| blooopen 3/28/12 . chapter 1
that was a decent filler chapter (: