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| Reviews for MapleStory: Warrior Brothers |
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   CaptCookie 7/8/12 . chapter 17:O Who's gonna win? And... NOOOOOO! You HAVE to continue this story! It's funny, and entertaining! |
| CaptCookie 7/8/12 . chapter 6 My. God. This. Chapter. XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD |
| iAmTheTot 5/2/12 . chapter 1 It was a pretty interesting opening. Not terrible, certainly not terrible. I kind of agree with another reviewer that the battle sequence could have used more gusto, more description. Other than that you actually seem to display a good understanding of the language, I only noticed a very small handful of spelling and grammatical errors but hey, we're all human. |
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 9 Can't wait for the next chapter. How could you leave it there? ;) |
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 8 OMG. I hope team nine don't fall into the trap! On to the next chapter! |
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 7 Nice reference to Pokemon. :D |
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 6 Hmmm... |
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 5 My favourite chapter yet. It was a nice length and written well. |
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 4 Fun update. |
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 3 LOL. Nice chapter progression. |
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 2 Nice dialogue. I like how you don't overdescribe things. |
| Callidora-Malfoy 4/14/12 . chapter 1 Interesting beginning. |
| Cytonic Flames 3/28/12 . chapter 7 Pokemon reference! FTW! Been reading this story for awhile now. |
| Zerhai Dragonspirit 3/28/12 . chapter 1 Ok first off I have never seen or played maple story so it is hard for me to relate to it, your fighting scenes are a bit awkward, and honestly the way you used the lines to break it up was confusing as well. Your descriptions are okay, though they could use a bit of work, the whole chapter feels a bit choppy as a whole. Though it gives enough at the end of the chapter for me to somewhat read the next chapter. Though my confusion with it stops me. |
| blooopen 3/28/12 . chapter 1 that was a decent filler chapter (: |
