|Reviews for Kahn's Greatest Mistake|
| M.E.Pea 11/22/12 . chapter 3
Hey guys! I'm so sorry about the delay! It's my senior year of high school and we have college apps and all that- but anyway! I should have it up before the end of the year (or the world- 12/21 ooooooh!) See you then :)
| Guest 10/31/12 . chapter 3
This was a very realistic "worst-case-scenario" for the KOTH characters' futures. Very disturbing, but well written and shows intimate knowledge of the show and characters, knowledge reflected in the dialogue and thoughts of characters.
| Guest 10/18/12 . chapter 3
hey ypo need to rite more chapters!
| Lord Vukodlak 9/9/12 . chapter 3
Some how I think when Josepth said "mistakes need to be taken care of." he was actually refering to Chane.
| The Legend of Derpy 7/3/12 . chapter 4
I'm sorry to bring this to your attention, but the site rules forbid you from posting an AN as a fic. Please remove this offending chapter.
Xx Write on, keep calm, and carry on! The Legend of Derpy, Proud Member of Critics United xX
| Sailor Pluto 7/2/12 . chapter 4
Perfectly fine but I doesn't hope its soon
| thelittlewitchgirl 6/11/12 . chapter 2
i don't like this connie, the connie that let's things happen to her, i pity her and i don't like to pity my female leads bt at the same time i'm rooting for her, so i guess you've done your job as far as making the characters likeable they are all very realistic as adults
| thelittlewitchgirl 6/11/12 . chapter 3
you are quite the powerful little writer, you know it? i can tell you put a lot of thought into making this story good. if all the characters were different and i had no idea what king of the hill was, and this was an original story of your own creation, i would still be completely enthralled with it. don't change a thing, please keep writing
| thelittlewitchgirl 6/11/12 . chapter 1
wow really nice to see a decent, well written KOTH fanfic on here for a change, but i'm upset by connie, i just don't see her sacrificing her dignity for her parents sake but i'm loving this damn fic so far!
| The Legend of Derpy 5/22/12 . chapter 3
I just cannot wait to see the reaction Bobby's parents will have when they find Connie sleeping in his bed. It has to happen in the next chapter, doesn't it?
Poor Bill, though I always knew he would die somehow as the result of food.
| Sailor Pluto 5/15/12 . chapter 3
Very very excellent story. Keep up the good work its pretty damn good and I can't wait to see what happens next.
The outcomes of Dale and Bill's lives are not all too surprising for me.
It was expected.
| The Legend of Derpy 5/2/12 . chapter 2
Oh my. I'm liking the drama. CONTINUE!
| Sailor Pluto 4/2/12 . chapter 2
Aww I only saw you had one review so I decided to give you another one. Okay so here it is. This story is pretty good. Though a little fast paced but still good.
Just try to make the moments last a little longer or something. Anyway I attempted my story for this section but it didn't turn out as good as this.
Good job and I can't wait to see what else is in store.
I always wondered who would end up with who.
Although I will admit that in later seasons Kahn and Minh loosened up a bit.
Anyway good job!
| StarReader86 3/21/12 . chapter 2
I am liking this story so far. As far as I know, this is the first Connie-centric story on the KOTH archive, making it even more interesting to read.
I like how you touched on Connie's diminished interaction with Bobby, and to a lesser extent, Joseph, since after her break-up with Bobby, she was less shown in the later seasons of the show. You've done an excellent job keeping everyone in character and showing the kids' older selves in a realistic way (e.g. Bobby fulfilling his comedian dream).
I am not surprised, but I am saddened by Connie being married to Chane. Just like she's done as a child, Connie married Chane only to please her parents. I almost feel like throttling Kahn and Minh for caring more about status than the happiness of their child, but I understand that they see success as a key to happiness, not true love. I wonder what their reaction will be once they find out about Connie's affair with Bobby and the birth of their new grandchild?
Even though this story is mostly about Connie, I hope you bring Joseph in to the story. Even though his actions are understandable, I hope Joseph at least comes back to see his parents, especially with Dale dying of, I'm guessing, lung cancer or aftereffects of the chemical poisons.
I really hope Connie makes a decision for herself once and for all on how to live her life. So please continue this story!