|Reviews for Revealing secrets|
| natalie 1/21/13 . chapter 8
this chapter is really great... i hope you write soon enough... looking forward to read this story... :)
| Jk 11/1/12 . chapter 8
Poor Lisa that's a lot to take in in one day
Hopefully Jack and Joe can help Lisa
please let Lisa fight in this & though the swearing could be toned down
Happy you updated
| trudes193 10/31/12 . chapter 8
Great chapter as always, and brilliant explanation on Joe and Lisa's boyfriend. Sorry you lost all your files, I know how that feels, happened to me too, I hope you are able to continue. Please update soon! :D
| Jk 8/29/12 . chapter 7
Oohhh...Lisa is going to be angry with her dad
Despite the swearing thus was a good update
| bexr91 8/27/12 . chapter 7
Interesting turn of events! Look forward to the explanation... Have you decided if there is jxl? :)
| trudes193 8/27/12 . chapter 7
Thank you for updating, this is a great chapter as always! Cannot wait for the next chapter, when Lisa finds out about her dads involvement. :D
| Guest 7/3/12 . chapter 6
Update soon! This previous chapter was the best one yet!
| trudes193 6/11/12 . chapter 6
Thank you for updating, this was a very interesting chapter, and I really enjoyed reading this. Please update soon! :D
| bexr91 6/11/12 . chapter 6
Great chapter,.. There are a few grammar and spelling errors and sometimes, it's as if you say their names too often in a sentence.
I like stories that address Lisa's comparison between Jackson and the Parking Lot guy, I think it's particularly important for her progression and chenged feelings toward him (if it is JxL) Update soon!
Happy Writing! B
| trudes193 5/19/12 . chapter 5
Thank you, and I love this this chapter too. Their interaction was perfect, lots of angst, but I also loved the memory Lisa had of her and Richard. It was nice, and romantic, and yet so sad too. Please update soon! :D
| trudes193 5/1/12 . chapter 4
Great chapter as always, really love the interaction between Lisa and Jackson, you have them down perfectly. Love the moment when Jackson lifts Lisa onto his shoulder, and carries her off the plane. Cannot wait for the next chapter, please update soon, can see lots of angst on their journey, and some revelations that Lisa may not want to hear. :D
| trudes193 4/7/12 . chapter 3
Great chapter, thank you for updating. Cannot wait for the next chapter, I sense a road trip, and lots of angst. Please update soon! :D
| I Am the Batman Dag Nab It 3/20/12 . chapter 2
Poor Lisa! Will that woman ever catch a break? Of course, Jackson is scheming up revenge... so I suppose that answers my question.
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
| trudes193 3/20/12 . chapter 2
Great update, I'm glad you updated this story. Like how this is turning out, it's drawing me in even more. I'm wondering if you have twists and turns, where I am going to be confused and then realize what is going on.
| I Am the Batman Dag Nab It 3/17/12 . chapter 1
Oh snap. Lovely cliff hanger, if I can compliment a cliff hanger. The entire chapter was also great. Very intriguing. However, you could use a beta. There are some grammar mistakes that I noticed. Nothing too serious, though. Please update soon!