I really want to see more. Please add more.

I'm so glad you posted this here. This story made me so happy.

Loved it. Your use of the 'hell, you were always ugly' line made me laugh out loud. Great.

This is absolutely wonderful. I'm so glad there are so many fanfics about the ending, so we don't have to settle for Bioware's shitty last 10 mins of the game. Thank you for this much-much-much better version of an ending.

Dang, how could Bioware get it so wrong? This is so very right and the comparison shames Bioware. I like how you took the canon end and added your own twist to make it so much more relevant. Keep writing and I'll certainly keep reading!

... See, I've wondered why people make out synthesis to be so bad. Cool fic.

Now THERE'S an ending I like. Seriously, this made very happy. I guess it's just the fact that it doesn't show you what happened afterward that upsets most fans... I'm sure thats alredy been established XD...

So is this going to address any of the negative aspects of synthesis or is synthesis just supposed to be this entirely positive thing that heals everyone and makes life wonderful?