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| Reviews for The MoonShine Chronicles |
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   rukoitalian65 3/23/13 . chapter 25Please update soon. This is a really good fanfic! :) |
| Zoeeeeeeeeeeeeee 2/13/13 . chapter 25 o-o Oh holy bejesus. Shit's goin' down. Damn that one vampire to hell. |
| Guest 12/3/12 . chapter 25 Cool! Is there another chapter for this story? |
| littlelillium 12/3/12 . chapter 1 Enjoyed the first chapter so far, love how you have jumped straight into the action. Its brilliant how you have described it all, easy to imagine and feel already involved. Well done, I look forward to reading some more soon. |
| Guest 11/27/12 . chapter 24 Cool! Is there another chapter for this story? |
| compa16 11/11/12 . chapter 3 ...must read more |
| RippahGoneWolf 10/18/12 . chapter 10 Okay, I will be honest. I like the story. I do. But, you have to improve on the writing part. There's so many run on sentences. I'm only trying to help you on that. There's a couple of small Mary-Sue moments here and there, but nothing bad. |
| Nykki13 10/4/12 . chapter 27 oh let them be together please oh and update soon |
| Mika2011 10/2/12 . chapter 27 I love this story but I am sad that Sonja is seen in such a negative light. |
| texican2436 9/12/12 . chapter 27 Yay an update, I'm a little confused on how much times has passed in between everything, has it been years since they've been to the castle? Also just a note: your writting is very good, vivid but don't fall into the habit of too many run-on sentences. There was a few that could have been broken up into a few sentences to make a very nice paragraph. Otherwise this was great especially that last paragraph, the ghost of Sonja stands between them- that gave me a chill. I look forward to the next update |
| KaiaUchiha1 9/11/12 . chapter 26 I love this story, Please update soon! |
| DesDesxoxo 8/20/12 . chapter 26 Please update :) |
| texican2436 8/15/12 . chapter 26 I love your imagery, very detailed. I hope u update soon love seeing how lucian and erzbet get closer |
| RogueMetamorph 7/27/12 . chapter 25 This is a fantastically written story and I'm sorry that I didn't review every single chapter. There are very few errors and I can see most of this happening with Lucian and everyone. However, it's a little Mary-Sue that these things keep happening. DON'T GET ME WRONG! I love the way this story is going and how many twists and turns occur, but be careful or it might be a bit much. Also, could you put a bit more interraction between Lucian, Erzsebet and the rest of the Lycans like Koro. It sort of feels like you're leaving them out. :( Anyway, I love this story so much please don't be mad for my earlier editorial comments! This story is fantastic and well written. Great job! You're fan, RogueMetamorph |
| texican2436 7/20/12 . chapter 25 The first few paragraphs were a little confusing but I was really happy once lucian found them. Love it |
